A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
Minor issues resolved - Passing this one
Comments
It says the rent was increased from £50 to £450 but was this per week, per month or per year? Same with the Hampden Park rent later on. Best just to make it clear.
"Celtic Park was an elongated oval shape, similar to
Hampden Park." - this sentence seems out of place to me after a paragraph about capacity and record attendances but not sure where else it could go
"Writing in 1996, Simon Inglis noted that the approaches to the Main Stand is an area of urban deprivation "reminiscent of
Belfast during
the Troubles". - the approaches ... is; can you just fix this so the verb matches the subject
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
Minor issues resolved - Passing this one
Comments
It says the rent was increased from £50 to £450 but was this per week, per month or per year? Same with the Hampden Park rent later on. Best just to make it clear.
"Celtic Park was an elongated oval shape, similar to
Hampden Park." - this sentence seems out of place to me after a paragraph about capacity and record attendances but not sure where else it could go
"Writing in 1996, Simon Inglis noted that the approaches to the Main Stand is an area of urban deprivation "reminiscent of
Belfast during
the Troubles". - the approaches ... is; can you just fix this so the verb matches the subject