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Reviewer: Casliber ( talk · contribs) 23:06, 17 March 2017 (UTC)
I'll take a look at this. I will make straightforward copyedits as I go (please revert if I accidentally change the meaning!)
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::but disappointingly were knocked out by the relatively unimpressive East German side, Sachsenring Zwickau - err, I you mean the club played unimpressively in the game not an unimpressive club...? Actually the East Germans were unimpressive (although they did win the tie). I'll have a re-look and try to re-phrase. 20/3/17 - I've now rephrased to "...were knocked out by East German side Sachsenring Zwickau, whose play was unimpressive despite winning the tie.." (ShugSty 20/3/17)
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Reviewer: Casliber ( talk · contribs) 23:06, 17 March 2017 (UTC)
I'll take a look at this. I will make straightforward copyedits as I go (please revert if I accidentally change the meaning!)
Cas Liber (
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23:06, 17 March 2017 (UTC)
::but disappointingly were knocked out by the relatively unimpressive East German side, Sachsenring Zwickau - err, I you mean the club played unimpressively in the game not an unimpressive club...? Actually the East Germans were unimpressive (although they did win the tie). I'll have a re-look and try to re-phrase. 20/3/17 - I've now rephrased to "...were knocked out by East German side Sachsenring Zwickau, whose play was unimpressive despite winning the tie.." (ShugSty 20/3/17)
1. Well written?:
2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:
3. Broad in coverage?:
4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:
5. Reasonably stable?
6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:
Overall: