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RM, Killing of Caylee Anthony → Death of Caylee Anthony, No consensus, 24 November 2022,
discussion(Note: moved back to Death of Caylee Anthony due it being the most recent prior stable title.)
RM, Death of Caylee Anthony → Killing of Caylee Anthony, Not moved, 2 December 2022,
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I want to propose a change in the evidence section. In paragraph two, sentence three, it is stated:
"The prosecution called software designer John Dennis Bradley, who testified that, based on a program he used to recover deleted searches, someone using the Anthony computer — he could not specify who — had searched for "chloroform" 84 times.[74] (After the trial, Bradley publicly reported that this number was an error attributable to a bug in his program, and that the computer, in fact, contained only one search for "chloroform".)"
The information in the parenthesis is too relevant to be an afterthought in parenthesis. I propose it should be changed as below, or something similar:
"The prosecution called software designer John Dennis Bradley, who testified that, based on a program he designed to recover deleted searches, someone using the Anthony computer — who could not be specified — had searched for "chloroform" 84 times[74]. Since the trial, Bradley has publicly reported that this number was an error attributable to a bug in his program, and that the computer, in fact, contained only one search for "chloroform".
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RM, Killing of Caylee Anthony → Death of Caylee Anthony, No consensus, 24 November 2022,
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RM, Death of Caylee Anthony → Killing of Caylee Anthony, Not moved, 2 December 2022,
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I want to propose a change in the evidence section. In paragraph two, sentence three, it is stated:
"The prosecution called software designer John Dennis Bradley, who testified that, based on a program he used to recover deleted searches, someone using the Anthony computer — he could not specify who — had searched for "chloroform" 84 times.[74] (After the trial, Bradley publicly reported that this number was an error attributable to a bug in his program, and that the computer, in fact, contained only one search for "chloroform".)"
The information in the parenthesis is too relevant to be an afterthought in parenthesis. I propose it should be changed as below, or something similar:
"The prosecution called software designer John Dennis Bradley, who testified that, based on a program he designed to recover deleted searches, someone using the Anthony computer — who could not be specified — had searched for "chloroform" 84 times[74]. Since the trial, Bradley has publicly reported that this number was an error attributable to a bug in his program, and that the computer, in fact, contained only one search for "chloroform".
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