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Nominator: Captain Galaxy ( talk · contribs) 01:25, 16 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Reviewer: TrademarkedTWOrantula ( talk · contribs) 18:05, 16 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Funny enough, I was just thinking of bringing this article to GA, as I myself am a mobile game enthusiast. TWOrantula^TM ( enter the web) 18:05, 16 July 2024 (UTC) reply

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1. Well-written:
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	2c. it contains no original research.
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Lead

• Note: I will correct minor grammar mistakes myself as to not waste time.
• The game encourages replayability by counting the player's deaths instead of giving the player lives. - To me, this sounds like OR, especially because the sources used to cite it do not directly mention how the gameplay encourages replayability.

 Done I believe this was probably added by me due to the wording of the 148Apps source: "After you've beaten the game, you can go back and try levels without dying, but for now, why not enjoy the journey?". With that being said, I've opted to remove any mention of the word replayability.

• The game was downloaded over five million times. - If information can be found, when was this achieved?

As far as I'm aware, the Sensor Tower source is the only reliable source to mention the game's download stats. Additionally, the first time this source was archived was by me this year so I can't check the way back machine to check.