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Reviewer: Sammi Brie ( talk · contribs) 07:17, 28 January 2023 (UTC)
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There are some copy changes. I'm also unsure as to how reference 26 has content to support the claim, and I'd suggest archiving references too. But you're almost there! 7-day hold to
BuySomeApples.
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Most comma removals are explained by User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences.
Earwig flags cited quotes and a handful of unavoidable formulations and work titles. There are no unreliable sources. Encouragement: Archive references with IABot.
Six of the 64 references were selected at random for spot checks:
That connected with what Tony [Gilroy, Andor's showrunner and executive producer] wanted to do.. This seems to justify the source.
But it is about that, and it’s about how much we’re all capable of changing and transforming, and that’s the beauty of storytelling.Also seems to be reprinted from another website, but it is correctly characterized here.
Luna embodies him with grim, composed determination laced with simmering anger and resentment. At least in the first four episodes that were provided to press, Luna evokes Andor’s severity and skill with aplomb, if not many other shades of his personality.
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie ( talk · contribs) 07:17, 28 January 2023 (UTC)
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There are some copy changes. I'm also unsure as to how reference 26 has content to support the claim, and I'd suggest archiving references too. But you're almost there! 7-day hold to
BuySomeApples.
Sammi Brie (she/her •
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07:17, 28 January 2023 (UTC)
Most comma removals are explained by User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences.
Earwig flags cited quotes and a handful of unavoidable formulations and work titles. There are no unreliable sources. Encouragement: Archive references with IABot.
Six of the 64 references were selected at random for spot checks:
That connected with what Tony [Gilroy, Andor's showrunner and executive producer] wanted to do.. This seems to justify the source.
But it is about that, and it’s about how much we’re all capable of changing and transforming, and that’s the beauty of storytelling.Also seems to be reprinted from another website, but it is correctly characterized here.
Luna embodies him with grim, composed determination laced with simmering anger and resentment. At least in the first four episodes that were provided to press, Luna evokes Andor’s severity and skill with aplomb, if not many other shades of his personality.
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to the infobox.