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Opening review
Kingsif (
talk) 21:35, 29 September 2019 (UTC)reply
Style
Good use of wikilinks
Lead good length for article
Made an amendment to one instance using km template - in this example it doesn't need conversion because the last distance mentioned is the same, but also the style of writing 5 km-long needs that connection which the template can't do
Very well written in terms of language, structure, connectives, and style
In the hydrology section, I don't think the Quebrada Achuco valley can be "accompanied" by wetlands; is there a different way to say they're in the same place?
"damaged floodgate caused a damaging flood" seems like it has an extra word, but I also feel it would benefit from some adjective there, if you want to edit that
Even though there's plenty of wikilinks, some expansion on the more specialist terms would make understanding the article easier
I never like saying this, but you might need to point to the specialist terms in question as I don't spot them readily.
Jo-Jo Eumerus (
talk,
contributions) 19:33, 30 September 2019 (UTC)reply
Needs attention
You could add the es wikipedia link, but otherwise looks good now.
Kingsif (
talk) 22:20, 5 October 2019 (UTC)reply
Coverage
Lead gives good overview
May need some clarification/extra info on why people can see Casiri and Paucarani as distinct volcanoes; presumably there are multiple peaks?
on hold - A few spots needing attention; I've made some minor mostly comma-based edits; well-written, nice article
Kingsif (
talk) 22:14, 29 September 2019 (UTC)reply
Thanks for replies and for updates; I also think I agree with all the points where you haven't been able to action things. Will take a look at the specialist terms and look over article soon.
Kingsif (
talk) 19:43, 30 September 2019 (UTC)reply
- could add the Es link mentioned above, but otherwise looking good!
Kingsif (
talk) 22:20, 5 October 2019 (UTC)reply
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Opening review
Kingsif (
talk) 21:35, 29 September 2019 (UTC)reply
Style
Good use of wikilinks
Lead good length for article
Made an amendment to one instance using km template - in this example it doesn't need conversion because the last distance mentioned is the same, but also the style of writing 5 km-long needs that connection which the template can't do
Very well written in terms of language, structure, connectives, and style
In the hydrology section, I don't think the Quebrada Achuco valley can be "accompanied" by wetlands; is there a different way to say they're in the same place?
"damaged floodgate caused a damaging flood" seems like it has an extra word, but I also feel it would benefit from some adjective there, if you want to edit that
Even though there's plenty of wikilinks, some expansion on the more specialist terms would make understanding the article easier
I never like saying this, but you might need to point to the specialist terms in question as I don't spot them readily.
Jo-Jo Eumerus (
talk,
contributions) 19:33, 30 September 2019 (UTC)reply
Needs attention
You could add the es wikipedia link, but otherwise looks good now.
Kingsif (
talk) 22:20, 5 October 2019 (UTC)reply
Coverage
Lead gives good overview
May need some clarification/extra info on why people can see Casiri and Paucarani as distinct volcanoes; presumably there are multiple peaks?
on hold - A few spots needing attention; I've made some minor mostly comma-based edits; well-written, nice article
Kingsif (
talk) 22:14, 29 September 2019 (UTC)reply
Thanks for replies and for updates; I also think I agree with all the points where you haven't been able to action things. Will take a look at the specialist terms and look over article soon.
Kingsif (
talk) 19:43, 30 September 2019 (UTC)reply
- could add the Es link mentioned above, but otherwise looking good!
Kingsif (
talk) 22:20, 5 October 2019 (UTC)reply