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Reviewer: CaroleHenson ( talk · contribs) 21:22, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
Hello, This seems like an interesting article. My approach is to read through the article and address any issues by section... and make minor edits (commas, links, etc.) that can be changed if you don't agree. And, then assess the GA criteria.–
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which scholars have parsed...can stay where it is. (i.e., the "which" doesn't refer to the informants, but to the account of the kings). Other minor edits include links and correction of a tense issue, all of which are here
Menéndez' primary goal in the voyage was to secure the release of Spanish shipwreck survivors living among the Calusa, including his son Juan.[14]. It sounds like it was before September 1565. See the above question re: contact with the Spanish.– CaroleHenson ( talk) 00:07, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
the relationship took a violent turn, asjust adds to confusion - which relationship? etc. It reads a little clearer without it.
The Calusa succession is charted in Goggin and Sturtevant 1964:193–194; Lewis 1978:32–33; Marquardt 1987:104-106; Widmer 1988:6; and McGoun 1993:12–16 and note.? Is it on another page?– CaroleHenson ( talk) 00:15, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
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There are no major issues preventing this article passing as a GA article. It would be helpful to clear up the timing of the shipwreck victims, which seems to be before September 1565. There are a few wording items.– CaroleHenson ( talk) 00:22, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
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Reviewer: CaroleHenson ( talk · contribs) 21:22, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
Hello, This seems like an interesting article. My approach is to read through the article and address any issues by section... and make minor edits (commas, links, etc.) that can be changed if you don't agree. And, then assess the GA criteria.–
CaroleHenson (
talk) 21:22, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
which scholars have parsed...can stay where it is. (i.e., the "which" doesn't refer to the informants, but to the account of the kings). Other minor edits include links and correction of a tense issue, all of which are here
Menéndez' primary goal in the voyage was to secure the release of Spanish shipwreck survivors living among the Calusa, including his son Juan.[14]. It sounds like it was before September 1565. See the above question re: contact with the Spanish.– CaroleHenson ( talk) 00:07, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
the relationship took a violent turn, asjust adds to confusion - which relationship? etc. It reads a little clearer without it.
The Calusa succession is charted in Goggin and Sturtevant 1964:193–194; Lewis 1978:32–33; Marquardt 1987:104-106; Widmer 1988:6; and McGoun 1993:12–16 and note.? Is it on another page?– CaroleHenson ( talk) 00:15, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
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There are no major issues preventing this article passing as a GA article. It would be helpful to clear up the timing of the shipwreck victims, which seems to be before September 1565. There are a few wording items.– CaroleHenson ( talk) 00:22, 14 April 2020 (UTC)