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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis ( talk · contribs) 01:57, 5 June 2020 (UTC) reply


Reviewing later.  Nova Crystallis (Talk) 01:57, 5 June 2020 (UTC) reply

  • Link minor ice hockey.  Done
  • He probably had some stats worth mentioning from his junior hockey years. Maybe some awards? Done
  • Add the Maple Leafs header?  Done
  • "Leafs best defenceman" Apostrophe.  Done
  • "teams final home game" Again.  Done
  • "Gunnarsson was traded to the St. Louis Blues (along with a fourth-round draft pick in the 2014 NHL Entry Draft)" Maybe "Gunnarsson and a fourth-round draft pick..."?  Done
  • "20 games for the Bues"  Done
  • "he was playing on a defensive pairing with Kevin Shattenkirk and helping the Blues maintain a 16-4-2 home record." Changing "helping" to past tense sounds better.  Done
  • "In the first year of his newest contract," Not the newest contract by the time we read the last paragraph of the section.  Done
  • "although" WP:EDITORIAL.  Done
  • AGF on offline sources.

That should be it.  Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:32, 5 June 2020 (UTC) reply

Nova Crystallis, I believe I have addressed all of the issues. HickoryOughtShirt?4 ( talk) 18:55, 5 June 2020 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Nova Crystallis ( talk · contribs) 01:57, 5 June 2020 (UTC) reply


Reviewing later.  Nova Crystallis (Talk) 01:57, 5 June 2020 (UTC) reply

  • Link minor ice hockey.  Done
  • He probably had some stats worth mentioning from his junior hockey years. Maybe some awards? Done
  • Add the Maple Leafs header?  Done
  • "Leafs best defenceman" Apostrophe.  Done
  • "teams final home game" Again.  Done
  • "Gunnarsson was traded to the St. Louis Blues (along with a fourth-round draft pick in the 2014 NHL Entry Draft)" Maybe "Gunnarsson and a fourth-round draft pick..."?  Done
  • "20 games for the Bues"  Done
  • "he was playing on a defensive pairing with Kevin Shattenkirk and helping the Blues maintain a 16-4-2 home record." Changing "helping" to past tense sounds better.  Done
  • "In the first year of his newest contract," Not the newest contract by the time we read the last paragraph of the section.  Done
  • "although" WP:EDITORIAL.  Done
  • AGF on offline sources.

That should be it.  Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:32, 5 June 2020 (UTC) reply

Nova Crystallis, I believe I have addressed all of the issues. HickoryOughtShirt?4 ( talk) 18:55, 5 June 2020 (UTC) reply

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