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Have made a small addition to the Alumni list, and will endeavor to clean the section tomorrow. Then I think we should go about implementing some of the suggestions made in the peer review.-- Veloxsilentium ( talk) 15:52, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
Is it OK for Wikipedia to show images of children without their consent? I know parents probably signed a release for these images to be placed on the school's website, but that release probably doesn't cover Wikipedia. New laws were recently introduced by the Victorian Bracks government to ban this sort of stuff involving Victorian kids, but Wikipedia is subject to different laws I think. Harro5 09:32, August 15, 2005 (UTC)
I do some of the productions and i normally take pictures i would be happy for any of my pictures to be used on wikipedia MGH Pics Hughesie89 11:05, May 15, 2007 (UTC)
The Victorian Government especially does not have control over Wikipedia nor the internet, nor the images Carey decides to use for promotional material and/or imagery on their website. I also do do not understand how showing pictures of students in the performing arts and sport could be seen as 'gimmicky' or to be seen as being not a NPOV - even the shot of the interior of the Millikan Building is hard to beleive as not being a NPOV. And also your well done Caulfield Grammar article shows face pics of students. I personally think this article should at least receive the benefit of the doubt of which it deserves. I apologise for not doing the picture labelling stuff correctly. I appreciate the contribution and your advice as well. However with the pics being labbelled as gimmicky and not being a NPOV by you, I am not entirely too sure it is correct. I hope this isn't silly APS envy because as we both know our schools directly compete as they have similar attributes and I know you are proud of Caulfield. However I truely hope that rediculousness doesn't come into the scene. Noiretblanc29 10:57, 19 August 2005 (UTC)
I think that the Air-Photo is fairly old - the Millikan building isn't included. Is there anything better we can use? Lochok 09:37, 16 August 2005 (UTC)
You really think the House System shouldn't be mentioned Harro5? As a current student, I know that it is greatly more important then many schools (at least from whom I know in Victoria) have. It is for this reason particularly notable - and it still is NPOV. It is also a major part of the history of the school, with reference to the older days of bording and uni-sexism. Just my 2 centrs...
Lochok 02:16, 12 September 2005 (UTC)
Yeah - understood. My apologies Lochok 07:34, 13 September 2005 (UTC)
The House information is a great thing to have on a wiki page it gives more information into the school
It is part of the history and culture of the school Quintus Petronius Augustus 23:20, 6 March 2013 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Quintus Petronius Augustus ( talk • contribs)
I must say, I was looking for exactly this information... to not find it. Harro5 is quite correct that "every school in Melbourne [indeed Victoria] has this". However, different schools put different emphases on its use. For some, it is merely a way to manage intra-school sports. For others, there are administrative, educational and even student management roles that houses fulfil. I have worked at schools where Year Level Coordinators have been abolished in favour of House Managers. Not discussing them - possibly in the context of a schools' student management strategies - seems an oversight. Even the mere listing of house names and colours can give hints to the social and cultural paradigms the school focuses on. Example: Covenant College in Geelong uses Wilberforce, Livingstone, Mueller and ten Boom as houses, and staff are encouraged to use those four personages as role models in discussions with students. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2402:B801:2857:7E00:A059:5E59:E261:3A82 ( talk) 02:56, 19 April 2022 (UTC)
I removed the out of date statistic "In 2005 the student population of girls will reach 44%." - if anyone can replace it, coolio. • Le on 04:13, 2 August 2006 (UTC)
The list of Notable Alumni seems to be getting fairly long. It is arguable how a lawyer could be notable alumini. Do we need to start culling of just let it grow or put a limit on it? Lochok 22:29, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
i have altered this article because its popularity doesnt impact upon the need to now about it —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Warrandyte4eva ( talk • contribs) 05:47, 9 May 2007 (UTC).
I have removed certain parts that I felt didn’t add to the overall article. Namely the caddie program & hear the voice sections. They were very poorly written and contained advertising (hear the voice email/website address). If anyone feels these should be re-added, feel free to rewrite them in a way that is comprehendible and post it here for review. 124.190.91.136 12:22, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
202.134.33.92
04:08, 20 August 2007 (UTC)Agreed, It adds nothing to the overall article, it also has little impact on school itself, so therefore I consider it irrelevant, 20/08/07
I also second that. Bad grammar, lots of 'we' and definatately not neutral. Genericguy 11:48, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
Best of all would be to leave editing of the entry to the person authorised to do so. It is damaging for an educational organisation to have published in its name material that is grammatically incorrect and full of typos. Christina Mowle 04:10, 31 August 2007 (UTC)
I have slightly changed the alumni section, removing one of the 'titles' attached to Steve Vizard's name. The title in question (inside trader) is inappropriate as all the other titles that everyother alumni has - are jobs/careers, correct me if I'm wrong, but inside trader isn't typically a career. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 58.160.112.200 ( talk) 07:57, 2 October 2007 (UTC)
The result was merge into Carey Baptist Grammar School. -- Loopla ( talk) 12:42, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
I have proposed a merger of Carey Sports Complex into this article. The Carey Sports Complex, in my opinion, is not notable enough to warrant its own article, and as the Carey Baptist Grammar School article has only limited coverage of the school's campuses/facilities, it would best included here. Loopla ( talk) 20:53, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
{{ edit semi-protected}} <Carey Baptist Grammar School Under heading "Whos Who in Australia", the following addition should be made. Prof Andrew Vizard('75) Andrew Vizard is an alumni of Carey Grammar, from the 1975 year. Andrew Vizard has had an entry in every edition of Whos Who in Australia since 2001. See any recent edition of Whos Who in Australia for reference.> So please change James Tonkin('83) Steve Vizard ('73) to James Tonkin ('83) Prof Andrew Vizard ('75) Steve Vizard ('73) 128.250.241.227 ( talk) 05:14, 3 February 2011 (UTC)
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Formerly, there used to be a VCE score table of all the recorded years. This is the same on most other Victoria school’s Wikipedia pages. Therefore, this table should be restored under the Curriculum section. Carey3146 ( talk) 05:19, 31 January 2023 (UTC)
Comparisons of sports results, exam results, etc. between schools ... unless third-party reliable sources themselves make such comparisons. Melcous ( talk) 11:04, 31 January 2023 (UTC)
Is it possible for someone to include next the name of Phil de Young under the Principal section of this article ' OAM' which stands for Order of Australia Medal. (This is one of the national orders of Australia that was given to him this year. The link to prove this is found next to his name. Carey3146 ( talk) 05:22, 3 February 2023 (UTC)
Tambor de Tocino has excessively removed factual and cited information with very poor reasoning to determine that information being removed. The article has shrunk dramatically that now shares very little information about the school. The editor claims that there are too many primary sources and that there is too much exceptional promotional information is false and a gross exaggeration of the facts at hand. After all, most schools have information about its history, former principals, co-curricular and alumni. Carey should not be the exception. I understand that some pieces of information can be excessive, and should be removed or at the least, discussed further on how that can be resolved, but the vast majority of information is informative to more than alumni and should be reinstated as soon as possible. Carey3146 ( talk) 11:28, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
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However, it has come to my attention that there is a new school chaplain that replaced Rev. Gerry Rivière in January 2024. The new chaplain is Rev. Timothy Edwards.
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Have made a small addition to the Alumni list, and will endeavor to clean the section tomorrow. Then I think we should go about implementing some of the suggestions made in the peer review.-- Veloxsilentium ( talk) 15:52, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
Is it OK for Wikipedia to show images of children without their consent? I know parents probably signed a release for these images to be placed on the school's website, but that release probably doesn't cover Wikipedia. New laws were recently introduced by the Victorian Bracks government to ban this sort of stuff involving Victorian kids, but Wikipedia is subject to different laws I think. Harro5 09:32, August 15, 2005 (UTC)
I do some of the productions and i normally take pictures i would be happy for any of my pictures to be used on wikipedia MGH Pics Hughesie89 11:05, May 15, 2007 (UTC)
The Victorian Government especially does not have control over Wikipedia nor the internet, nor the images Carey decides to use for promotional material and/or imagery on their website. I also do do not understand how showing pictures of students in the performing arts and sport could be seen as 'gimmicky' or to be seen as being not a NPOV - even the shot of the interior of the Millikan Building is hard to beleive as not being a NPOV. And also your well done Caulfield Grammar article shows face pics of students. I personally think this article should at least receive the benefit of the doubt of which it deserves. I apologise for not doing the picture labelling stuff correctly. I appreciate the contribution and your advice as well. However with the pics being labbelled as gimmicky and not being a NPOV by you, I am not entirely too sure it is correct. I hope this isn't silly APS envy because as we both know our schools directly compete as they have similar attributes and I know you are proud of Caulfield. However I truely hope that rediculousness doesn't come into the scene. Noiretblanc29 10:57, 19 August 2005 (UTC)
I think that the Air-Photo is fairly old - the Millikan building isn't included. Is there anything better we can use? Lochok 09:37, 16 August 2005 (UTC)
You really think the House System shouldn't be mentioned Harro5? As a current student, I know that it is greatly more important then many schools (at least from whom I know in Victoria) have. It is for this reason particularly notable - and it still is NPOV. It is also a major part of the history of the school, with reference to the older days of bording and uni-sexism. Just my 2 centrs...
Lochok 02:16, 12 September 2005 (UTC)
Yeah - understood. My apologies Lochok 07:34, 13 September 2005 (UTC)
The House information is a great thing to have on a wiki page it gives more information into the school
It is part of the history and culture of the school Quintus Petronius Augustus 23:20, 6 March 2013 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Quintus Petronius Augustus ( talk • contribs)
I must say, I was looking for exactly this information... to not find it. Harro5 is quite correct that "every school in Melbourne [indeed Victoria] has this". However, different schools put different emphases on its use. For some, it is merely a way to manage intra-school sports. For others, there are administrative, educational and even student management roles that houses fulfil. I have worked at schools where Year Level Coordinators have been abolished in favour of House Managers. Not discussing them - possibly in the context of a schools' student management strategies - seems an oversight. Even the mere listing of house names and colours can give hints to the social and cultural paradigms the school focuses on. Example: Covenant College in Geelong uses Wilberforce, Livingstone, Mueller and ten Boom as houses, and staff are encouraged to use those four personages as role models in discussions with students. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2402:B801:2857:7E00:A059:5E59:E261:3A82 ( talk) 02:56, 19 April 2022 (UTC)
I removed the out of date statistic "In 2005 the student population of girls will reach 44%." - if anyone can replace it, coolio. • Le on 04:13, 2 August 2006 (UTC)
The list of Notable Alumni seems to be getting fairly long. It is arguable how a lawyer could be notable alumini. Do we need to start culling of just let it grow or put a limit on it? Lochok 22:29, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
i have altered this article because its popularity doesnt impact upon the need to now about it —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Warrandyte4eva ( talk • contribs) 05:47, 9 May 2007 (UTC).
I have removed certain parts that I felt didn’t add to the overall article. Namely the caddie program & hear the voice sections. They were very poorly written and contained advertising (hear the voice email/website address). If anyone feels these should be re-added, feel free to rewrite them in a way that is comprehendible and post it here for review. 124.190.91.136 12:22, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
202.134.33.92
04:08, 20 August 2007 (UTC)Agreed, It adds nothing to the overall article, it also has little impact on school itself, so therefore I consider it irrelevant, 20/08/07
I also second that. Bad grammar, lots of 'we' and definatately not neutral. Genericguy 11:48, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
Best of all would be to leave editing of the entry to the person authorised to do so. It is damaging for an educational organisation to have published in its name material that is grammatically incorrect and full of typos. Christina Mowle 04:10, 31 August 2007 (UTC)
I have slightly changed the alumni section, removing one of the 'titles' attached to Steve Vizard's name. The title in question (inside trader) is inappropriate as all the other titles that everyother alumni has - are jobs/careers, correct me if I'm wrong, but inside trader isn't typically a career. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 58.160.112.200 ( talk) 07:57, 2 October 2007 (UTC)
The result was merge into Carey Baptist Grammar School. -- Loopla ( talk) 12:42, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
I have proposed a merger of Carey Sports Complex into this article. The Carey Sports Complex, in my opinion, is not notable enough to warrant its own article, and as the Carey Baptist Grammar School article has only limited coverage of the school's campuses/facilities, it would best included here. Loopla ( talk) 20:53, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
{{ edit semi-protected}} <Carey Baptist Grammar School Under heading "Whos Who in Australia", the following addition should be made. Prof Andrew Vizard('75) Andrew Vizard is an alumni of Carey Grammar, from the 1975 year. Andrew Vizard has had an entry in every edition of Whos Who in Australia since 2001. See any recent edition of Whos Who in Australia for reference.> So please change James Tonkin('83) Steve Vizard ('73) to James Tonkin ('83) Prof Andrew Vizard ('75) Steve Vizard ('73) 128.250.241.227 ( talk) 05:14, 3 February 2011 (UTC)
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Formerly, there used to be a VCE score table of all the recorded years. This is the same on most other Victoria school’s Wikipedia pages. Therefore, this table should be restored under the Curriculum section. Carey3146 ( talk) 05:19, 31 January 2023 (UTC)
Comparisons of sports results, exam results, etc. between schools ... unless third-party reliable sources themselves make such comparisons. Melcous ( talk) 11:04, 31 January 2023 (UTC)
Is it possible for someone to include next the name of Phil de Young under the Principal section of this article ' OAM' which stands for Order of Australia Medal. (This is one of the national orders of Australia that was given to him this year. The link to prove this is found next to his name. Carey3146 ( talk) 05:22, 3 February 2023 (UTC)
Tambor de Tocino has excessively removed factual and cited information with very poor reasoning to determine that information being removed. The article has shrunk dramatically that now shares very little information about the school. The editor claims that there are too many primary sources and that there is too much exceptional promotional information is false and a gross exaggeration of the facts at hand. After all, most schools have information about its history, former principals, co-curricular and alumni. Carey should not be the exception. I understand that some pieces of information can be excessive, and should be removed or at the least, discussed further on how that can be resolved, but the vast majority of information is informative to more than alumni and should be reinstated as soon as possible. Carey3146 ( talk) 11:28, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
Carey3146 has finally declared COI at WP:COIN 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 11:54, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
Hi, I want to reaffirm my recognised COI of this article and that I have no intention whatsoever to edit or damage the integrity of this article again.
However, it has come to my attention that there is a new school chaplain that replaced Rev. Gerry Rivière in January 2024. The new chaplain is Rev. Timothy Edwards.
Thank you for considering this possible update. Carey3146 ( talk) 06:13, 5 February 2024 (UTC)