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Reviewer: Sasata ( talk) 19:32, 20 July 2010 (UTC) reply

Hi, I've picked up this review. Looks pretty good, just a few comments and suggestions:

• lead: link Texas, confluence
• History: link/define Tejas; 2000 census; gated community
• "oddly shaped Piper Lakes" what's odd about their shape?
• should give metric conversions for distances
• "Carancahua Bay is protected by the State of Texas" would protected area be a useful link here?
• 300 member -> should be hyphenated
• link pH
• link shrimping
• "save for a small slither of water" should this be "sliver"?
• "believed to contain 33 Billion Cubic Feet of natural gas" why the capitals? (and needs metric conversion)
• "to develop ten reserves in the area" what is a reserve?

Thank you for the review. I believe I have addressed all concerns.-- William S. Saturn ( talk) 22:39, 20 July 2010 (UTC) reply

I think the article meets all the GA criteria, so I shall promote it now. Sasata ( talk) 23:31, 20 July 2010 (UTC) reply