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This article needs to take on a more encyclopedic tone. For instance, stating that the death penalty "costs a lot of money" could be much more concrete. There a number of elements here that could be a bit more specific. PurpleChez ( talk) 19:04, 26 September 2018 (UTC) reply

@ PurpleChez: Does it look better now? Anything else you think needs improvement? -- David Tornheim ( talk) 15:02, 21 May 2020 (UTC) reply
Much! Kudos! PurpleChez ( talk) 17:29, 21 May 2020 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

encyclopedic-ness

This article needs to take on a more encyclopedic tone. For instance, stating that the death penalty "costs a lot of money" could be much more concrete. There a number of elements here that could be a bit more specific. PurpleChez ( talk) 19:04, 26 September 2018 (UTC) reply

@ PurpleChez: Does it look better now? Anything else you think needs improvement? -- David Tornheim ( talk) 15:02, 21 May 2020 (UTC) reply
Much! Kudos! PurpleChez ( talk) 17:29, 21 May 2020 (UTC) reply

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