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Reviewer: Nikkimaria ( talk · contribs) 21:46, 16 March 2024 (UTC) reply

• The lead is on the long side given the article's length

 Fixed I believe ...a few sentences removed. Moxy🍁 06:15, 19 March 2024 (UTC) reply

• "for the common good of all the world's nations and not just its allies". When referring to countries or nations, referring to the world is redundant

 Fixed Moxy🍁 06:15, 19 March 2024 (UTC) reply

• "approximately 130 Canadians having given their lives" - see MOS:EUPH. Ditto "loss of life"

 Fixed Moxy🍁 06:15, 19 March 2024 (UTC) reply

Er, looks like this is still there? Nikkimaria ( talk) 04:15, 20 March 2024 (UTC) reply

sorry my bad.... I think it was there twice or I copying and pasted it back over. Moxy🍁 05:09, 20 March 2024 (UTC) reply

• "Approximately 130 Canadians having given their lives during peacekeeping operations (123 in UN missions)." - not a complete sentence. The article would benefit from a thorough copy-editing

 Fixed Moxy🍁 06:15, 19 March 2024 (UTC) reply

• "Military observers, commanded by Lieutenant-General E.L.M. Burns". Given that the listing is from 1948 to present, this is potentially confusing - suggest clarifying, and doing the same for other similar entries.

 Removed..having reasl trouble finding all commanders...some say 7 some say 10 others say 11...so will simply let sources cover this by each mission. Moxy🍁 06:15, 19 March 2024 (UTC) reply

• Not a big fan of the organization of the article - the lead section is meant to serve as an overview, so having a separate Overview section doesn't make a lot of sense. One possible division would be History, Operations, and Recognition.

 Fixed I believe Moxy🍁 06:15, 19 March 2024 (UTC) reply

• "being looked upon to find a solution" - why?

 Fixed..reworded Moxy🍁 06:15, 19 March 2024 (UTC) reply

• The only significant controversy mentioned is Somalia. The article would be more balanced with discussion of other controversies, such as Rwanda, or critiques of its general approach

 Fixed Moxy🍁 06:15, 19 March 2024 (UTC) reply

• Suggest adding alt text. Nikkimaria ( talk) 21:46, 16 March 2024 (UTC) reply

 Fixed Moxy🍁 17:49, 19 March 2024 (UTC) reply

• Thank you so much will work on all points...ping you in a few days or so. Moxy🍁 00:34, 17 March 2024 (UTC) reply

  @ Nikkimaria: ok lets take a look ....see what more I can do. No rush!!!!! Moxy🍁 18:04, 19 March 2024 (UTC) reply

  Sorry hard to evaluate with edit after edit going on..., the topic can be endless. Will sit back and see what you think. Spring is here. Moxy🍁 23:07, 20 March 2024 (UTC) reply

I think the main remaining issue here is article structure - the organization remains a bit unclear for me. For example, how is the material being divided into Peace operations vs Participation - what goes in one section and what goes in the other? Nikkimaria ( talk) 00:22, 21 March 2024 (UTC) reply

I invite you or anyone to edit the structure that best serves our readers. Should we merger the sections?...i am up to whatever you think is best. Moxy🍁 00:35, 21 March 2024 (UTC) reply

Ok got an emal about structure .- info moved around....see what you think..@ Nikkimaria:. Moxy🍁 07:21, 23 March 2024 (UTC) reply

I think that's reasonable. Nikkimaria ( talk) 19:04, 23 March 2024 (UTC) reply