Nothing I've been able to track down - there was
File:Varo RN Basilicata.jpg, but it was determined at the Italian list ACR that without a publication date, we couldn't use it.
Specify that the displacement in the infobox is full load
Done
Use ftin when converting from meters.
Can you tell that this is an old article?
;-)
Specify and link type of boiler in the infobox and tell the reader that the engines in the infobox that they're steam engines
Done
Link ihp in the infobox
Done
Link naval cadets, register, broadside
Done
She was also equipped Pronoun problem
Fixed - good catch
on each broadside in sponsoned on the main deck Missing word?
Fixed
Both of these guns were manufactured by Ansaldo and were designed in 1912 and 1917, respectively. Design date not important here. Fold Andsaldo into the preceding sentence.
Reworked - that whole section was a bit confusing
explain L/40
Fixed
Not entirely. They were also equipped with two Ansaldo 76 mm (3.0 in) L40 guns and three 76 mm 40-cal. guns in anti-aircraft mountings Rework this to say that two guns were in low-angle mounts and 3 in high-angle ones or somesuch. Also, if you're going to give shell weight for these guns, you should definitely do it for the 152mm ones.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk)
16:30, 22 January 2018 (UTC)reply
Good catch - ctrl+F for "L/" didn't spot that one ;) Oddly enough, I can't get a shell weight for the 152mm - neither Friedman nor Conway's provides it (Conway's doesn't include the 40-cal. version in the table, and the shell weight varied between the 50-cal and 45-cal guns of that caliber).
Parsecboy (
talk)
17:59, 22 January 2018 (UTC)reply
Strange, but not that critical. Aren't the low-angle and high-angle guns, the same weapons, just on different mounts? I'll let you sort that out on your own.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk)
18:19, 22 January 2018 (UTC)reply
Merge the appropriate cells in the table and link the headings
Nothing I've been able to track down - there was
File:Varo RN Basilicata.jpg, but it was determined at the Italian list ACR that without a publication date, we couldn't use it.
Specify that the displacement in the infobox is full load
Done
Use ftin when converting from meters.
Can you tell that this is an old article?
;-)
Specify and link type of boiler in the infobox and tell the reader that the engines in the infobox that they're steam engines
Done
Link ihp in the infobox
Done
Link naval cadets, register, broadside
Done
She was also equipped Pronoun problem
Fixed - good catch
on each broadside in sponsoned on the main deck Missing word?
Fixed
Both of these guns were manufactured by Ansaldo and were designed in 1912 and 1917, respectively. Design date not important here. Fold Andsaldo into the preceding sentence.
Reworked - that whole section was a bit confusing
explain L/40
Fixed
Not entirely. They were also equipped with two Ansaldo 76 mm (3.0 in) L40 guns and three 76 mm 40-cal. guns in anti-aircraft mountings Rework this to say that two guns were in low-angle mounts and 3 in high-angle ones or somesuch. Also, if you're going to give shell weight for these guns, you should definitely do it for the 152mm ones.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk)
16:30, 22 January 2018 (UTC)reply
Good catch - ctrl+F for "L/" didn't spot that one ;) Oddly enough, I can't get a shell weight for the 152mm - neither Friedman nor Conway's provides it (Conway's doesn't include the 40-cal. version in the table, and the shell weight varied between the 50-cal and 45-cal guns of that caliber).
Parsecboy (
talk)
17:59, 22 January 2018 (UTC)reply
Strange, but not that critical. Aren't the low-angle and high-angle guns, the same weapons, just on different mounts? I'll let you sort that out on your own.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk)
18:19, 22 January 2018 (UTC)reply
Merge the appropriate cells in the table and link the headings