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Reviewer: Extraordinary Writ ( talk · contribs) 00:01, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
@ Modussiccandi: This article seems to be in pretty good shape, so my comments below should generally be construed more as suggestions than as steadfast requirements. Feel free to let me know if I've misunderstood anything.
An entry in the Suda...is the only substantial source– the source says the Suda is the "principal source", and there appear to be have been other sources (e.g. Tzetzes's Prolegemona). You might change "only substantial" to "main" or something like that.
pays homage to Callimachus' believe– I presume "belief" is what you're looking for.
This issue is father complicated by Callimachus purposeful amalgamation– "father" should be "further", and "Callimachus" needs an apostrophe.
With with few exception– typos
Callimachus describes dream in which– typo
They form a friendship as the she recount– typos
while his poem Aetia– italicize Aetia
Classical scholars place Callimachus among the most influential Greek poets.– This is a statement of academic consensus, which, per WP:RS/AC, requires a citation to a source directly summarizing the consensus. (I'm sure there's one floating out there somewhere, so this shouldn't be too hard to find.)
I should have more comments for you in the near future. Thanks for your work on this article! Extraordinary Writ ( talk) 18:46, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
sometimes subsumed under the term of Alexandrianism– you might want to link Alexandrian school, to which Alexandrianism redirects.
Busiris, king of Egypt– per MOS:OL, linking Egypt shouldn't be necessary. Alternatively, you could make it a piped link to Ancient Egypt, which is a more pertinent article.
in Cyrene, a Greek city on the coast of Libya– "modern-day Libya", "present-day Libya", etc. would be clearer.
With few exception, the collection– typo
Sorry for the delay (I inadvertently closed out a tab and lost half my comments); I hope to have more to say soon. Cheers, Extraordinary Writ ( talk) 00:17, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
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Thanks again for your work on this article, and best of luck in your future endeavors! Cheers, Extraordinary Writ ( talk) 22:12, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
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@ Modussiccandi: This article seems to be in pretty good shape, so my comments below should generally be construed more as suggestions than as steadfast requirements. Feel free to let me know if I've misunderstood anything.
An entry in the Suda...is the only substantial source– the source says the Suda is the "principal source", and there appear to be have been other sources (e.g. Tzetzes's Prolegemona). You might change "only substantial" to "main" or something like that.
pays homage to Callimachus' believe– I presume "belief" is what you're looking for.
This issue is father complicated by Callimachus purposeful amalgamation– "father" should be "further", and "Callimachus" needs an apostrophe.
With with few exception– typos
Callimachus describes dream in which– typo
They form a friendship as the she recount– typos
while his poem Aetia– italicize Aetia
Classical scholars place Callimachus among the most influential Greek poets.– This is a statement of academic consensus, which, per WP:RS/AC, requires a citation to a source directly summarizing the consensus. (I'm sure there's one floating out there somewhere, so this shouldn't be too hard to find.)
I should have more comments for you in the near future. Thanks for your work on this article! Extraordinary Writ ( talk) 18:46, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
sometimes subsumed under the term of Alexandrianism– you might want to link Alexandrian school, to which Alexandrianism redirects.
Busiris, king of Egypt– per MOS:OL, linking Egypt shouldn't be necessary. Alternatively, you could make it a piped link to Ancient Egypt, which is a more pertinent article.
in Cyrene, a Greek city on the coast of Libya– "modern-day Libya", "present-day Libya", etc. would be clearer.
With few exception, the collection– typo
Sorry for the delay (I inadvertently closed out a tab and lost half my comments); I hope to have more to say soon. Cheers, Extraordinary Writ ( talk) 00:17, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
Thanks again for your work on this article, and best of luck in your future endeavors! Cheers, Extraordinary Writ ( talk) 22:12, 4 July 2021 (UTC)