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”Calitoxin is a highly potent neurotoxin, which can be found in the nematocysts, organelles in stinging cells, of the Calliactis parasitica.” fix grammar
better?? —
Gaffταλκ 16:54, 18 November 2014 (UTC)reply
”Two genes coding for two highly homologous calitoxins are discovered and analyzed” fix
missing information: who discovered calitoxin, when, and under what circumstances? The short etymology section could perhaps be merged with this info
renamed and expanded the section. Hopefully sufficient? —
Gaffταλκ 21:16, 18 November 2014 (UTC)reply
has anyone quantified the amount of calitoxin in Calliactis parasitica?
Not that I can find. I found the minimum dose (it is in the article). The extraction method sounds pretty crude, so I doubt that anyone can say exactly how much is in there. —
Gaffταλκ 04:00, 19 November 2014 (UTC)reply
”by injecting a 0.1 mL solution with 0.2 µg lyophilized CLX of into the hemocoel.” this is far too much detail for a general encyclopedia
— fixed. —
Gaffταλκ 04:00, 19 November 2014 (UTC)reply
. There are three. Added. —
Gaffταλκ 17:09, 18 November 2014 (UTC)reply
is the compound commonly used in studies of ion channels?
— fixed. —
Gaffταλκ 04:00, 19 November 2014 (UTC)reply
Comments
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Sasata: The above concerns have been addressed. I've substantially expanded the article, added a table comparing the sequences, and restructured problematic sections. Please let me know what else can be done to bring this to GA status. —
Gaffταλκ 19:27, 19 November 2014 (UTC)reply
The corrections and additions look great! I've made some
additional copyedits and added more links; feel free to revert if you don't like them. I'm confident that this article now meets the
GA criteria, and am happy to promote at his time. Cheers,
Sasata (
talk) 19:53, 21 November 2014 (UTC)reply
A fact from Calitoxin appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the Did you know column on 20 October 2014 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Molecular Biology, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
Molecular Biology on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Molecular BiologyWikipedia:WikiProject Molecular BiologyTemplate:WikiProject Molecular BiologyMolecular Biology articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Chemicals, a daughter project of WikiProject Chemistry, which aims to improve Wikipedia's coverage of chemicals. To participate, help improve this article or visit the
project page for details on the project.ChemicalsWikipedia:WikiProject ChemicalsTemplate:WikiProject Chemicalschemicals articles
”Calitoxin is a highly potent neurotoxin, which can be found in the nematocysts, organelles in stinging cells, of the Calliactis parasitica.” fix grammar
better?? —
Gaffταλκ 16:54, 18 November 2014 (UTC)reply
”Two genes coding for two highly homologous calitoxins are discovered and analyzed” fix
missing information: who discovered calitoxin, when, and under what circumstances? The short etymology section could perhaps be merged with this info
renamed and expanded the section. Hopefully sufficient? —
Gaffταλκ 21:16, 18 November 2014 (UTC)reply
has anyone quantified the amount of calitoxin in Calliactis parasitica?
Not that I can find. I found the minimum dose (it is in the article). The extraction method sounds pretty crude, so I doubt that anyone can say exactly how much is in there. —
Gaffταλκ 04:00, 19 November 2014 (UTC)reply
”by injecting a 0.1 mL solution with 0.2 µg lyophilized CLX of into the hemocoel.” this is far too much detail for a general encyclopedia
— fixed. —
Gaffταλκ 04:00, 19 November 2014 (UTC)reply
. There are three. Added. —
Gaffταλκ 17:09, 18 November 2014 (UTC)reply
is the compound commonly used in studies of ion channels?
— fixed. —
Gaffταλκ 04:00, 19 November 2014 (UTC)reply
Comments
@
Sasata: The above concerns have been addressed. I've substantially expanded the article, added a table comparing the sequences, and restructured problematic sections. Please let me know what else can be done to bring this to GA status. —
Gaffταλκ 19:27, 19 November 2014 (UTC)reply
The corrections and additions look great! I've made some
additional copyedits and added more links; feel free to revert if you don't like them. I'm confident that this article now meets the
GA criteria, and am happy to promote at his time. Cheers,
Sasata (
talk) 19:53, 21 November 2014 (UTC)reply