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Reviewer: J Milburn ( talk · contribs) 21:41, 6 November 2013 (UTC)
I'm afraid that this article is not ready for GA status at this time. However, I can offer you a few pointers on what needs to be done before renomination.
[Lead] -Description -Taxonomy -Ecology -Distribution and habitat -Ecology --Feeding --Predation --Breeding and life cycle --Migration and territoritality -Human interactions -Conservation status [References and external links]
I've no doubt that once you've worked on the above issues, this will be ready for GA status, and I'd be happy to offer another review when you renominate. If you're looking for advice, you're welcome to contact me on my talk page, but I'm no fish expert; if you need one, you may want to contact Yzx ( talk · contribs). Don't be disheartened- the research is good, it just needs to be arranged in a Wikipedia-friendly way. J Milburn ( talk) 21:41, 6 November 2013 (UTC)
Thanks so much for your feedback! I'm in the process of making the proposed changes to the article, and I'm planning on submitting it for Good Article nomination soon. Ldorn1227 ( talk) 21:12, 19 November 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: J Milburn ( talk · contribs) 21:41, 6 November 2013 (UTC)
I'm afraid that this article is not ready for GA status at this time. However, I can offer you a few pointers on what needs to be done before renomination.
[Lead] -Description -Taxonomy -Ecology -Distribution and habitat -Ecology --Feeding --Predation --Breeding and life cycle --Migration and territoritality -Human interactions -Conservation status [References and external links]
I've no doubt that once you've worked on the above issues, this will be ready for GA status, and I'd be happy to offer another review when you renominate. If you're looking for advice, you're welcome to contact me on my talk page, but I'm no fish expert; if you need one, you may want to contact Yzx ( talk · contribs). Don't be disheartened- the research is good, it just needs to be arranged in a Wikipedia-friendly way. J Milburn ( talk) 21:41, 6 November 2013 (UTC)
Thanks so much for your feedback! I'm in the process of making the proposed changes to the article, and I'm planning on submitting it for Good Article nomination soon. Ldorn1227 ( talk) 21:12, 19 November 2013 (UTC)