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Reviewer: MathewTownsend ( talk · contribs) 23:08, 7 July 2012 (UTC) reply

review
  • "below-grade freeway " - what does this mean?
  • there are sone bare urls used as citations. e.g. [1], [2] and [3] These need to be formated.
  • I have made a few edits which you are free to change: [4]
  • That's all. Good work, and on hold.

MathewTownsend ( talk) 23:33, 7 July 2012 (UTC) reply

Should be good now. -- Rs chen 7754 00:10, 8 July 2012 (UTC) reply
reply - just a little more
  • lede
  • Due to congestion, several alternatives are being discussed to expand the freeway portion past its current end in Newport Beach.
  • what is the time frame for "everal alternatives are being discussed to expand the freeway portion "
  • History
  • "In April 2007, the Orange County Transportation Authority approved funds to study the feasibility of extending the Costa Mesa Freeway south to 17th Street via tunnels or flyover ramps."
  • Is this the "alternatives ... being discussed" in the lede?
  • what is the outcome of this study, since this is over five years later?
  • citations
  • This citation still needed fixing: [5]
  • I attempted to fix it but it's not quite the format you've been using. Might want to check it.

MathewTownsend ( talk) 13:36, 8 July 2012 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: MathewTownsend ( talk · contribs) 23:08, 7 July 2012 (UTC) reply

review
  • "below-grade freeway " - what does this mean?
  • there are sone bare urls used as citations. e.g. [1], [2] and [3] These need to be formated.
  • I have made a few edits which you are free to change: [4]
  • That's all. Good work, and on hold.

MathewTownsend ( talk) 23:33, 7 July 2012 (UTC) reply

Should be good now. -- Rs chen 7754 00:10, 8 July 2012 (UTC) reply
reply - just a little more
  • lede
  • Due to congestion, several alternatives are being discussed to expand the freeway portion past its current end in Newport Beach.
  • what is the time frame for "everal alternatives are being discussed to expand the freeway portion "
  • History
  • "In April 2007, the Orange County Transportation Authority approved funds to study the feasibility of extending the Costa Mesa Freeway south to 17th Street via tunnels or flyover ramps."
  • Is this the "alternatives ... being discussed" in the lede?
  • what is the outcome of this study, since this is over five years later?
  • citations
  • This citation still needed fixing: [5]
  • I attempted to fix it but it's not quite the format you've been using. Might want to check it.

MathewTownsend ( talk) 13:36, 8 July 2012 (UTC) reply


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