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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Cduran21, Danae Hall.
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Great work! Your article regarding the California Senate Bill 32 is very informative. The table in your timeline section is a very effective approach for displaying the progression of this bill. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Shelanzuhdi ( talk • contribs) 21:57, 6 December 2016 (UTC)
Hi, Cduran21 and Danae ! I've read through your article. Some comments:
I made some punctuation edits to your article, that you can check in the "View History" tab.
Great work!
Comment added by Totranm ( talk) —Preceding undated comment added 05:00, 9 December 2016 (UTC)
This is very informative and helps clarify the difference between the former AB32. Thank you- great work! Bobbi13 ( talk) 20:29, 9 December 2016 (UTC)Bobbi13 (Carolyn)
Here are some suggestions to improve the article from an uninvolved Wikipedian:
The most important thing to keep in mind here is that the entirety of this law is as follows: "In adopting rules and regulations to achieve the maximum technologically feasible and cost-effective greenhouse gas emissions reductions authorized by this division, the state board shall ensure that statewide greenhouse gas emissions are reduced to at least 40 percent below the statewide greenhouse gas emissions limit no later than December 31, 2030. ... This act shall become operative only if Assembly Bill 197 of the 2015–16 Regular Session is enacted and becomes effective on or before January 1, 2017."
This article has some good content but often strays from the topic.
Thanks, Calliopejen1 ( talk) 21:49, 9 December 2016 (UTC)
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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Cduran21, Danae Hall.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 18:32, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
Great work! Your article regarding the California Senate Bill 32 is very informative. The table in your timeline section is a very effective approach for displaying the progression of this bill. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Shelanzuhdi ( talk • contribs) 21:57, 6 December 2016 (UTC)
Hi, Cduran21 and Danae ! I've read through your article. Some comments:
I made some punctuation edits to your article, that you can check in the "View History" tab.
Great work!
Comment added by Totranm ( talk) —Preceding undated comment added 05:00, 9 December 2016 (UTC)
This is very informative and helps clarify the difference between the former AB32. Thank you- great work! Bobbi13 ( talk) 20:29, 9 December 2016 (UTC)Bobbi13 (Carolyn)
Here are some suggestions to improve the article from an uninvolved Wikipedian:
The most important thing to keep in mind here is that the entirety of this law is as follows: "In adopting rules and regulations to achieve the maximum technologically feasible and cost-effective greenhouse gas emissions reductions authorized by this division, the state board shall ensure that statewide greenhouse gas emissions are reduced to at least 40 percent below the statewide greenhouse gas emissions limit no later than December 31, 2030. ... This act shall become operative only if Assembly Bill 197 of the 2015–16 Regular Session is enacted and becomes effective on or before January 1, 2017."
This article has some good content but often strays from the topic.
Thanks, Calliopejen1 ( talk) 21:49, 9 December 2016 (UTC)