"to defeat the Michigan State Spartans in the Quarterfinals." - quarterfinals
"in the second round of the 2019 NCAA Division I Men's Ice Hockey Tournament against the UMass Minutemen, Notre Dame lost 4–0 and was eliminated from the tournament." - close reptition of "tournament"
"becoming only the second goaltender to wear a letter under head coach Jeff Jackson" - I think the middle of this sentence could be reworded a little for non-Ice hockey readers
Wikilink training camp
International play
"Morris was selected to play for the United States at the 2014 World Junior A Challenge." - perhaps state where the tournament was held?
References
References 1, 7, 8, 24 are dead and will need to be archived
References 23, 24 are missing their respective works
The titles of those references that are spelt out entirely in capital letters should be avoided per
MOS:ALLCAPS
"to defeat the Michigan State Spartans in the Quarterfinals." - quarterfinals
"in the second round of the 2019 NCAA Division I Men's Ice Hockey Tournament against the UMass Minutemen, Notre Dame lost 4–0 and was eliminated from the tournament." - close reptition of "tournament"
"becoming only the second goaltender to wear a letter under head coach Jeff Jackson" - I think the middle of this sentence could be reworded a little for non-Ice hockey readers
Wikilink training camp
International play
"Morris was selected to play for the United States at the 2014 World Junior A Challenge." - perhaps state where the tournament was held?
References
References 1, 7, 8, 24 are dead and will need to be archived
References 23, 24 are missing their respective works
The titles of those references that are spelt out entirely in capital letters should be avoided per
MOS:ALLCAPS