"the public rumor ahd begun to spread around the general public"
Done
"about who the men involved were" → "the identities of the men involved"
Done
"a big street fighting occurred" → "a large street fight" without the WL
Done
"a number that parodied" → "a number parodying"
Done
comma for em dash after "June 4, 1943,"
Done
Ensuing gay persecution
"Goodwin was apprehend the same day as his friend," → "Goodwin was apprehended the same day as his friend"
Done
"the age of majority until July—which was 22 years old at the time—" ((right arrow)) "the age of majority (which, at the time, was 22 years old) until July"
Putting on hold for now to allow nominator to address comments. Feel free to ping me with questions. — GhostRiver 19:18, 16 October 2021 (UTC)reply
GhostRiver, thank you for taking a look. I've made the corrections. Let me know if everything's ok! --
ℜ𝔲𝔪𝔟𝔞 𝔖𝔞𝔪𝔟𝔞 𝔐𝔞𝔪𝔟𝔬 🌠 (
talk) 18:31, 17 October 2021 (UTC)reply
Looks great now, happy to pass! — GhostRiver 18:36, 17 October 2021 (UTC)reply
"the public rumor ahd begun to spread around the general public"
Done
"about who the men involved were" → "the identities of the men involved"
Done
"a big street fighting occurred" → "a large street fight" without the WL
Done
"a number that parodied" → "a number parodying"
Done
comma for em dash after "June 4, 1943,"
Done
Ensuing gay persecution
"Goodwin was apprehend the same day as his friend," → "Goodwin was apprehended the same day as his friend"
Done
"the age of majority until July—which was 22 years old at the time—" ((right arrow)) "the age of majority (which, at the time, was 22 years old) until July"
Putting on hold for now to allow nominator to address comments. Feel free to ping me with questions. — GhostRiver 19:18, 16 October 2021 (UTC)reply
GhostRiver, thank you for taking a look. I've made the corrections. Let me know if everything's ok! --
ℜ𝔲𝔪𝔟𝔞 𝔖𝔞𝔪𝔟𝔞 𝔐𝔞𝔪𝔟𝔬 🌠 (
talk) 18:31, 17 October 2021 (UTC)reply
Looks great now, happy to pass! — GhostRiver 18:36, 17 October 2021 (UTC)reply