Cut down the amount quoted from Residente per
WP:QUOTEFARM
"going on to call it" → "going on to call the song"
"He also describes" → "He also described"
The last para is all release and promotional info that can be moved to a section entitled Release and promotion; place this directly below Music and lyrics
Wikilink
Apple Music on the first citation of ref 10
Remove wikilink on Apple Music for ref 15
Add (VG) in brackets after Apple Music on ref 17
Cite Hypebeast as work/website instead for ref 26
Remove or replace ref 29 per my earlier comment
Middle name should be cited after the first name for ref 31
External links
Good
Final comments and verdict
On hold until all of the issues are fixed but like last time, don't feel afraid to reach out if you have any questions! --
K. Peake16:25, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
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Kyle Peake: About "Are you sure the performers are credited under their stage names as songwriters like you've done in the infobox?", they are written as: "René Pérez a/k/a Residente", "Benito Martínez Ocasio a/k/a Bad Bunny", and "Enrique Martin a/k/a Ricky Martin". Should I use "René Pérez", "Benito Martínez Ocasio" and "Enrique Martin"? And if so, do I have to target them to their articles or not?
And why is [11] useless there? This sentence "All songs on the EP, except for previously released "Tiburones," are collaborations with artists Martin had never collaborated with" is used for the fact that it's the first collaboration between Martin and the other artists
آرمین هویدایی (
talk)
18:00, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
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Kyle Peake: Thank you, and what about the latter question? Do I have to remove that reference or is it useful? I also has another question, should I write "Live performances" as a subsection or just the second para of Release and promotion?
آرمین هویدایی (
talk)
10:23, 16 March 2021 (UTC)reply
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آرمین هویدایی: It is useful, I must have missed that info when spot checking, my apologies. Regarding the sub-section possibility, do not create one and instead make it the second para of the section. --
K. Peake10:04, 16 March 2021 (UTC)reply
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آرمین هویدایی: You did miss adding a comma in the comp section, but I copyedited that in due to an issue that had arisen after you implemented my suggestions also being present in that section. ✓Pass now, it definitely reflects that you have been on Wiki for years with your consistent responses! --
K. Peake13:49, 16 March 2021 (UTC)reply
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Kyle Peake: Thank you so much. That's an honor for me to hear that from you as a professional wikipedian. I learned a lot from you and I will try to do better in my next works.
آرمین هویدایی (
talk)
15:42, 16 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Cut down the amount quoted from Residente per
WP:QUOTEFARM
"going on to call it" → "going on to call the song"
"He also describes" → "He also described"
The last para is all release and promotional info that can be moved to a section entitled Release and promotion; place this directly below Music and lyrics
Wikilink
Apple Music on the first citation of ref 10
Remove wikilink on Apple Music for ref 15
Add (VG) in brackets after Apple Music on ref 17
Cite Hypebeast as work/website instead for ref 26
Remove or replace ref 29 per my earlier comment
Middle name should be cited after the first name for ref 31
External links
Good
Final comments and verdict
On hold until all of the issues are fixed but like last time, don't feel afraid to reach out if you have any questions! --
K. Peake16:25, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake: About "Are you sure the performers are credited under their stage names as songwriters like you've done in the infobox?", they are written as: "René Pérez a/k/a Residente", "Benito Martínez Ocasio a/k/a Bad Bunny", and "Enrique Martin a/k/a Ricky Martin". Should I use "René Pérez", "Benito Martínez Ocasio" and "Enrique Martin"? And if so, do I have to target them to their articles or not?
And why is [11] useless there? This sentence "All songs on the EP, except for previously released "Tiburones," are collaborations with artists Martin had never collaborated with" is used for the fact that it's the first collaboration between Martin and the other artists
آرمین هویدایی (
talk)
18:00, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake: Thank you, and what about the latter question? Do I have to remove that reference or is it useful? I also has another question, should I write "Live performances" as a subsection or just the second para of Release and promotion?
آرمین هویدایی (
talk)
10:23, 16 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
آرمین هویدایی: It is useful, I must have missed that info when spot checking, my apologies. Regarding the sub-section possibility, do not create one and instead make it the second para of the section. --
K. Peake10:04, 16 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
آرمین هویدایی: You did miss adding a comma in the comp section, but I copyedited that in due to an issue that had arisen after you implemented my suggestions also being present in that section. ✓Pass now, it definitely reflects that you have been on Wiki for years with your consistent responses! --
K. Peake13:49, 16 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake: Thank you so much. That's an honor for me to hear that from you as a professional wikipedian. I learned a lot from you and I will try to do better in my next works.
آرمین هویدایی (
talk)
15:42, 16 March 2021 (UTC)reply