A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Order of writers is different to that of the Lead.
Lead info
No issues.
Background
No issues.
Composition
(Vocal range is wrong)
No other issues.
Critical reception
"In his review of E=MC2" → You need a "²" here.
"it heavily to "
Don't Forget About Us"" → Doesn't need to be wiki-linked again, it was linked in the Composition section.
Chart performance
"the united Kingdom" → Need a capital 'U'
"select part of Europe" → "parts", not "part"
"in its third.[52]" → "In its third week" ?
"each country in charted" → think you mean 'it'.
" It debuted and peaked at number 70 in Germany, and debuted at number eighty-eight on the UK Singles Chart.[48][49] Six weeks later, on July 5, 2008, the song peaked at number thirty, due to the release of the song's music video.[50]" → 70 should be seventy, and I assume you are talking about the UK when you say it peaked at thirty?Calvin •
NaNaNaC'mon!
"Carey took to Europe to perform on several programs" → You only mention T4, so you should re-word the sentence to fit in with the United Kindgom, as you give two promo appearances for the UK.
"Tamara ones of" → ? Not sure this is mean't to be.
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Order of writers is different to that of the Lead.
Lead info
No issues.
Background
No issues.
Composition
(Vocal range is wrong)
No other issues.
Critical reception
"In his review of E=MC2" → You need a "²" here.
"it heavily to "
Don't Forget About Us"" → Doesn't need to be wiki-linked again, it was linked in the Composition section.
Chart performance
"the united Kingdom" → Need a capital 'U'
"select part of Europe" → "parts", not "part"
"in its third.[52]" → "In its third week" ?
"each country in charted" → think you mean 'it'.
" It debuted and peaked at number 70 in Germany, and debuted at number eighty-eight on the UK Singles Chart.[48][49] Six weeks later, on July 5, 2008, the song peaked at number thirty, due to the release of the song's music video.[50]" → 70 should be seventy, and I assume you are talking about the UK when you say it peaked at thirty?Calvin •
NaNaNaC'mon!
"Carey took to Europe to perform on several programs" → You only mention T4, so you should re-word the sentence to fit in with the United Kindgom, as you give two promo appearances for the UK.
"Tamara ones of" → ? Not sure this is mean't to be.