"singer Billie Eilish." → "singer Billie Eilish from her debut studio album, When We All Fall Asleep, Where Do We Go? (2019)." since you should mention what album it's from before the fact that it is a single
"as the third single from Eilish's..." → "as the third single from the album"
"American alternative radio stations" → "US alternative radio stations" as American is too vague; North and South are respective contents...
"2019 through Darkroom" → "2019, with both releases occurring through Darkroom"
"During the dark and violent lyrics" → "Within the dark and violent lyrics"
"Australia and the United Kingdom" → "Australia, and the United Kingdom"
"the song's release" → "the song's initial release" to specify it was in Jan
"initial" implies that there were multiple versions of the song; it wasn't the case. I don*t think this helps too much...
Alright
"—who provides uncredited vocals on the song—" → ", who provides uncredited vocals on the song," so that we know Eilish is the one being pulled
"at venues including" → "at venues in 2019, including"
Remove 2019 from before the tour in this context
Background and development
"American alternative radio stations" → "US alternative radio stations" as per lead
"to make his acquaintance" → "to make him her acquaintance"
Composition and lyrical interpretation
"credits the song" → "credited the song"
"as a synth-pop,[11] and electronica track in press reviews.[12]" → "as a synth-pop and electronica track in press reviews.[11][12]" comma is not needed and ref 11 can then go at the end of the sentence
"topping the Alternative Songs chart" → "topping the US Alternative Songs chart"
"only the 10th solo woman" → "only the tenth solo woman"
"first top 10 in the country" → "first top ten on the
UK Singles Chart"
"the top 10 in countries" → "the top ten in countries"
Music video
"and has thus been regarded" → "which have led to it being regarded"
"Eilish elaborated" → "Eilish explained"
"from a nightmare as a" → "from a nightmare while a"
"disappears under Mehki's bed.[10] Scenes also see" → "disappears under Mehki's bed,[10] with scenes also seeing" as the sentences can be merged
Live performances and other usage
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First sentence is not needed as it is stating the obvious
"She appeared on" → "Eilish performed the song on"
"black sweater and shorts alongside" → "black sweater and shorts, alongside"
"She further sang it" → "She later sang it"
"The remix sees the original song "run [...] through" → "Bein stated that the remix takes the original song and "runs it through"
"the later half."[59]" → "the later half".[59]"
Credits and personnel
Good
Charts
Weekly charts
Remove Digital Song Sales and Alternative Songs per
Wikipedia:CHARTS
Year-end charts
Good
Certifications
Isn't RIAA supposed to be sales+streaming and BPI shipments?
I use the templates, I think they display correct information, though.
Release history
Think we could get this table in to improve the article as the required information exists?
We don't know the medium it was released on on January 30. And in addition to that we only know the release date for the US alternative radio. I personally don't think we need an extra table for the minimum of info we have.
"singer Billie Eilish." → "singer Billie Eilish from her debut studio album, When We All Fall Asleep, Where Do We Go? (2019)." since you should mention what album it's from before the fact that it is a single
"as the third single from Eilish's..." → "as the third single from the album"
"American alternative radio stations" → "US alternative radio stations" as American is too vague; North and South are respective contents...
"2019 through Darkroom" → "2019, with both releases occurring through Darkroom"
"During the dark and violent lyrics" → "Within the dark and violent lyrics"
"Australia and the United Kingdom" → "Australia, and the United Kingdom"
"the song's release" → "the song's initial release" to specify it was in Jan
"initial" implies that there were multiple versions of the song; it wasn't the case. I don*t think this helps too much...
Alright
"—who provides uncredited vocals on the song—" → ", who provides uncredited vocals on the song," so that we know Eilish is the one being pulled
"at venues including" → "at venues in 2019, including"
Remove 2019 from before the tour in this context
Background and development
"American alternative radio stations" → "US alternative radio stations" as per lead
"to make his acquaintance" → "to make him her acquaintance"
Composition and lyrical interpretation
"credits the song" → "credited the song"
"as a synth-pop,[11] and electronica track in press reviews.[12]" → "as a synth-pop and electronica track in press reviews.[11][12]" comma is not needed and ref 11 can then go at the end of the sentence
"topping the Alternative Songs chart" → "topping the US Alternative Songs chart"
"only the 10th solo woman" → "only the tenth solo woman"
"first top 10 in the country" → "first top ten on the
UK Singles Chart"
"the top 10 in countries" → "the top ten in countries"
Music video
"and has thus been regarded" → "which have led to it being regarded"
"Eilish elaborated" → "Eilish explained"
"from a nightmare as a" → "from a nightmare while a"
"disappears under Mehki's bed.[10] Scenes also see" → "disappears under Mehki's bed,[10] with scenes also seeing" as the sentences can be merged
Live performances and other usage
Img needs alt text
First sentence is not needed as it is stating the obvious
"She appeared on" → "Eilish performed the song on"
"black sweater and shorts alongside" → "black sweater and shorts, alongside"
"She further sang it" → "She later sang it"
"The remix sees the original song "run [...] through" → "Bein stated that the remix takes the original song and "runs it through"
"the later half."[59]" → "the later half".[59]"
Credits and personnel
Good
Charts
Weekly charts
Remove Digital Song Sales and Alternative Songs per
Wikipedia:CHARTS
Year-end charts
Good
Certifications
Isn't RIAA supposed to be sales+streaming and BPI shipments?
I use the templates, I think they display correct information, though.
Release history
Think we could get this table in to improve the article as the required information exists?
We don't know the medium it was released on on January 30. And in addition to that we only know the release date for the US alternative radio. I personally don't think we need an extra table for the minimum of info we have.