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Reviewer: Doctorg ( talk · contribs) 15:19, 4 September 2017 (UTC)
I am now starting this review. Thank you for the time you have put into this article and your work towards expanding Wikipedia’s quality content. I will add my comments into each of the following sections.
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@ Adam9007: Just a few minor grammatical issues that need to be cleaned up and, if you can find them, a few images would add a lot to the article. See below for my comments. DoctorG (talk) 16:23, 4 September 2017 (UTC)
Are there any screenshots available of some of the games, pictures of game boxes, or something similar? Including a few of these would make the article pop!Plenty, but I'm not sure how to justify using any of them in this article. I don't think they'll meet WP:NFCC, especially criterion 8. Their omission is not detrimental to the understanding of the company who made it. The games themselves, yes, but not the developer. The only thing I can think of is a screenshot of Theme Park with an explanation that Molyneux wanted gay graphics to appeal to the Japanese (that is already in the body), but even that isn't really necessary. Can you think of reasons why including screenshots or box art of Bullfrog games can significantly increase the reader's understanding of the company? Adam9007 ( talk) 02:51, 5 September 2017 (UTC)
I'm failing this one because there hasn'r been any real movement to update it in the past few weeks. Feel free to requbmit when you have time to get it cleaned up. DoctorG (talk) 15:05, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
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I am now starting this review. Thank you for the time you have put into this article and your work towards expanding Wikipedia’s quality content. I will add my comments into each of the following sections.
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15:19, 4 September 2017 (UTC)
@ Adam9007: Just a few minor grammatical issues that need to be cleaned up and, if you can find them, a few images would add a lot to the article. See below for my comments. DoctorG (talk) 16:23, 4 September 2017 (UTC)
Are there any screenshots available of some of the games, pictures of game boxes, or something similar? Including a few of these would make the article pop!Plenty, but I'm not sure how to justify using any of them in this article. I don't think they'll meet WP:NFCC, especially criterion 8. Their omission is not detrimental to the understanding of the company who made it. The games themselves, yes, but not the developer. The only thing I can think of is a screenshot of Theme Park with an explanation that Molyneux wanted gay graphics to appeal to the Japanese (that is already in the body), but even that isn't really necessary. Can you think of reasons why including screenshots or box art of Bullfrog games can significantly increase the reader's understanding of the company? Adam9007 ( talk) 02:51, 5 September 2017 (UTC)
I'm failing this one because there hasn'r been any real movement to update it in the past few weeks. Feel free to requbmit when you have time to get it cleaned up. DoctorG (talk) 15:05, 18 September 2017 (UTC)