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"before getting selected by the Pittsburgh Pirates in the 14th round of the 1968 Major League Baseball Draft." - the word "Draft" does not need to start with a capital letter
Pittsburgh Pirates (1971-79)
"That strong start netted him" - earned him
"That strong start netted him a call-up to the big leagues for the first time in July," - try not to use the term "big leagues" where possible
"then picked up the win as the Pirates won 9–5," - repetition of the word "won"
"clinching a trip to the World Series." - earning a spot in
"Sent to Charleston to prove himself" - It would help to know what exactly he was proving himself for
"Used as a starter again in September, he won a couple more games," - how many more games exactly?
"After posting an ERA near 6.00 in his first five starts," - ERA close to 6.00
"the start would be one of the best of his career.[25][2]" - refs in numerical order please
"He joined the Pirates' rotation May 23" - Pirates' rotation on May 23
"His most important start of the season came in the Pirates' last game of the year, a game against the Cubs" - repetition of the word "game"
Wikilink free agent
California Angels (1980-84) and Boston Red Sox (1985)
"Kison complained of paralysis in his hand and a lack of feeling in three of his dingers after undergoing surgery on his ulnar nerve." - you mean fingers?
"Kison was the Opening Day starter for the Angels, the first time in his 13 seasons he got a chance to start on Opening Day." - repetition of the phrase "Opening Day"
"Though his career was in jeopardy of being over," - ending
"after giving up 6 runs in three starts in a row." - relinquishing six runs
"He later spent time as the Kansas City Royals' bullpen coach (1992–93), the Royals' pitching coach (1994–98)[51][52][53] and the" -a comma is missing before the stacking of the references
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"before getting selected by the Pittsburgh Pirates in the 14th round of the 1968 Major League Baseball Draft." - the word "Draft" does not need to start with a capital letter
Pittsburgh Pirates (1971-79)
"That strong start netted him" - earned him
"That strong start netted him a call-up to the big leagues for the first time in July," - try not to use the term "big leagues" where possible
"then picked up the win as the Pirates won 9–5," - repetition of the word "won"
"clinching a trip to the World Series." - earning a spot in
"Sent to Charleston to prove himself" - It would help to know what exactly he was proving himself for
"Used as a starter again in September, he won a couple more games," - how many more games exactly?
"After posting an ERA near 6.00 in his first five starts," - ERA close to 6.00
"the start would be one of the best of his career.[25][2]" - refs in numerical order please
"He joined the Pirates' rotation May 23" - Pirates' rotation on May 23
"His most important start of the season came in the Pirates' last game of the year, a game against the Cubs" - repetition of the word "game"
Wikilink free agent
California Angels (1980-84) and Boston Red Sox (1985)
"Kison complained of paralysis in his hand and a lack of feeling in three of his dingers after undergoing surgery on his ulnar nerve." - you mean fingers?
"Kison was the Opening Day starter for the Angels, the first time in his 13 seasons he got a chance to start on Opening Day." - repetition of the phrase "Opening Day"
"Though his career was in jeopardy of being over," - ending
"after giving up 6 runs in three starts in a row." - relinquishing six runs
"He later spent time as the Kansas City Royals' bullpen coach (1992–93), the Royals' pitching coach (1994–98)[51][52][53] and the" -a comma is missing before the stacking of the references