" led by Mayor La Guardia" just check with
MOS:BIO if we need to capitalise mayor here.
lamppost or lamp post?
"San FranciscoâOakland Bay Bridge.[62][4][5]:115 " order.
Be consistent with the format of your refs to the World Fair.
"The Tacoma Narrows Bridge employed " we can just go with "It employed".
"led to a misconception" are we sure? did it really just lead to a "belief"?
Huge reliance on the word "would" which becomes sometimes painfully repetitive, when all you're doing is talking about the past tense. Mix it up a bit.
"completed by 2007.[104][64] " ref order.
"started in 2008[106][64] " ditto (but avoid such horrible placement).
"he Queens approach, which cost $109 million,[109] was completed in May 2015,[107] During the renovation of the Queens " repetitive again.
[136][111] order.
Unspaced end-dashes in that table.
Don't quote a range when a range doesn't exist!
How is $9.50 in 2019 $8.69 yet in the April 2019 row be just $9.50?
Link to NY Portal is a dab.
Avoid SHOUTING in ref titles.
Avoid spaced hyphens (they should be en-dashes) in ref titles.
That's my first run through. It's a great article. I imagine someone else coming in assessing it against the baseline GAN would just pass it. I'm sorry to give you more than that, but this could easily run at FAC. I hope some of the comments I have help should you decide to take this further.
The Rambling Man (
Staying alive since 2005!)
20:53, 22 August 2019 (UTC)reply
@
The Rambling Man: Thanks for the review. I've solved most of these, except for the following:
Unspaced end-dashes in that table. - I will fix these soon. Just have to go over the articles with similar tables with AWB.
How is $9.50 in 2019 $8.69 yet in the April 2019 row be just $9.50? - That must be a mistake. $8.50 in 2017 is equal to $8.69 today, and that's how the table reads.
I don't know right now, I'm on holiday (hence the notice on my talkpage) so I'm really only getting time to do easy things like review main page items, and then I fall asleep. I should be back in the saddle much more enthusiastically in a few days time, apologies for keeping your waiting.
The Rambling Man (
Staying alive since 2005!)
19:29, 26 August 2019 (UTC)reply
" led by Mayor La Guardia" just check with
MOS:BIO if we need to capitalise mayor here.
lamppost or lamp post?
"San FranciscoâOakland Bay Bridge.[62][4][5]:115 " order.
Be consistent with the format of your refs to the World Fair.
"The Tacoma Narrows Bridge employed " we can just go with "It employed".
"led to a misconception" are we sure? did it really just lead to a "belief"?
Huge reliance on the word "would" which becomes sometimes painfully repetitive, when all you're doing is talking about the past tense. Mix it up a bit.
"completed by 2007.[104][64] " ref order.
"started in 2008[106][64] " ditto (but avoid such horrible placement).
"he Queens approach, which cost $109 million,[109] was completed in May 2015,[107] During the renovation of the Queens " repetitive again.
[136][111] order.
Unspaced end-dashes in that table.
Don't quote a range when a range doesn't exist!
How is $9.50 in 2019 $8.69 yet in the April 2019 row be just $9.50?
Link to NY Portal is a dab.
Avoid SHOUTING in ref titles.
Avoid spaced hyphens (they should be en-dashes) in ref titles.
That's my first run through. It's a great article. I imagine someone else coming in assessing it against the baseline GAN would just pass it. I'm sorry to give you more than that, but this could easily run at FAC. I hope some of the comments I have help should you decide to take this further.
The Rambling Man (
Staying alive since 2005!)
20:53, 22 August 2019 (UTC)reply
@
The Rambling Man: Thanks for the review. I've solved most of these, except for the following:
Unspaced end-dashes in that table. - I will fix these soon. Just have to go over the articles with similar tables with AWB.
How is $9.50 in 2019 $8.69 yet in the April 2019 row be just $9.50? - That must be a mistake. $8.50 in 2017 is equal to $8.69 today, and that's how the table reads.
I don't know right now, I'm on holiday (hence the notice on my talkpage) so I'm really only getting time to do easy things like review main page items, and then I fall asleep. I should be back in the saddle much more enthusiastically in a few days time, apologies for keeping your waiting.
The Rambling Man (
Staying alive since 2005!)
19:29, 26 August 2019 (UTC)reply