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Reviewer: SNUGGUMS ( talk · contribs) 21:09, 21 January 2018 (UTC)
I'll give this a review. Expect initial comments within one or two weeks.
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Let's start with the lead and infobox.....
More to come later on. Snuggums ( talk / edits) 03:03, 22 January 2018 (UTC)
I cited the address, and put the meaning of MBTA into the lede. Unfortunately, the 2013 ridership data is the most recent available (though I'm hoping for a newer release this year). Pi.1415926535 ( talk) 03:14, 22 January 2018 (UTC)
Bus connections: The Mini-Maller does not run to the BAT Centre, hence the current wording.
References: The "via" parameter is used to indicate when the content delivery system (Google Books) is not the same as the original publisher; see Template:Cite book#Publisher. "The Boston Globe" now used in both citations.
Other than a few turns of phrase that we disagree on, and the one imperfect citation, I believe I've addressed all your issues. Cheers, Pi.1415926535 ( talk) 00:29, 5 February 2018 (UTC)
I'll do the next subsection in the future when I get a chance..... Snuggums ( talk / edits) 18:04, 27 January 2018 (UTC)
Another subsection done for now. The subsequent one will come in my next batch of comments. Snuggums ( talk / edits) 07:00, 3 February 2018 (UTC)
– Finnusertop ( talk ⋅ contribs) 20:14, 3 February 2018 (UTC)
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Reviewer: SNUGGUMS ( talk · contribs) 21:09, 21 January 2018 (UTC)
I'll give this a review. Expect initial comments within one or two weeks.
Snuggums (
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21:09, 21 January 2018 (UTC)
Let's start with the lead and infobox.....
More to come later on. Snuggums ( talk / edits) 03:03, 22 January 2018 (UTC)
I cited the address, and put the meaning of MBTA into the lede. Unfortunately, the 2013 ridership data is the most recent available (though I'm hoping for a newer release this year). Pi.1415926535 ( talk) 03:14, 22 January 2018 (UTC)
Bus connections: The Mini-Maller does not run to the BAT Centre, hence the current wording.
References: The "via" parameter is used to indicate when the content delivery system (Google Books) is not the same as the original publisher; see Template:Cite book#Publisher. "The Boston Globe" now used in both citations.
Other than a few turns of phrase that we disagree on, and the one imperfect citation, I believe I've addressed all your issues. Cheers, Pi.1415926535 ( talk) 00:29, 5 February 2018 (UTC)
I'll do the next subsection in the future when I get a chance..... Snuggums ( talk / edits) 18:04, 27 January 2018 (UTC)
Another subsection done for now. The subsequent one will come in my next batch of comments. Snuggums ( talk / edits) 07:00, 3 February 2018 (UTC)
– Finnusertop ( talk ⋅ contribs) 20:14, 3 February 2018 (UTC)