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This page sounds rather as if it was written by an estate agent. It needs to serious NPOV and factual correction. akaDruid 14:58, 22 Jun 2004 (UTC)
I have added a NPOV and factual message to the top. Specifically, these are some of the areas that need looking at:
akaDruid 15:16, 22 Jun 2004 (UTC)
OK. Not an estate agent - just a happy resident.
The first point is a fair one, though maybe a matter of opinion.
The shopping parade comment should refer to neighbourhood parades - ie not the town centre
Buchan country park is outside the Broadfield/Crawley boundaries, although it feels like its within. The Pease Pottage land is actually within the town boundaries although it feels like it is outside. When the new bypass was built it left a few odd-shaped bits of land stranded on the far side. Geographically they are contiguous with the High Weald AONB and would make more sense to not be part of Crawley, but they are, and are part of Broadfield.
Fastway is itself a topic of great controversy within the town. However, with 1.5 million passengers so far (Summer 2004) it would not be correct to say it is hardly used. Having used the service I have always found it to be regular and quick.
I have updated the page to remove what seemed like unecessary or over the top phrases, and to provide a more wiki-like style. However, a page like this will always have a more parochial feel than some. It would be nice to have the original NPOV/Factual removed if possible, or further edits made if it still seems wrong. -- jodastephen 15:07, 31 Oct 2004 (UTC)
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This page sounds rather as if it was written by an estate agent. It needs to serious NPOV and factual correction. akaDruid 14:58, 22 Jun 2004 (UTC)
I have added a NPOV and factual message to the top. Specifically, these are some of the areas that need looking at:
akaDruid 15:16, 22 Jun 2004 (UTC)
OK. Not an estate agent - just a happy resident.
The first point is a fair one, though maybe a matter of opinion.
The shopping parade comment should refer to neighbourhood parades - ie not the town centre
Buchan country park is outside the Broadfield/Crawley boundaries, although it feels like its within. The Pease Pottage land is actually within the town boundaries although it feels like it is outside. When the new bypass was built it left a few odd-shaped bits of land stranded on the far side. Geographically they are contiguous with the High Weald AONB and would make more sense to not be part of Crawley, but they are, and are part of Broadfield.
Fastway is itself a topic of great controversy within the town. However, with 1.5 million passengers so far (Summer 2004) it would not be correct to say it is hardly used. Having used the service I have always found it to be regular and quick.
I have updated the page to remove what seemed like unecessary or over the top phrases, and to provide a more wiki-like style. However, a page like this will always have a more parochial feel than some. It would be nice to have the original NPOV/Factual removed if possible, or further edits made if it still seems wrong. -- jodastephen 15:07, 31 Oct 2004 (UTC)
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