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Reviewer: Usernameunique ( talk · contribs) 01:51, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
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the cafe was purchased by Tom and Laura Lane-Ruckman— "soon purchased"? But only if there's a cite.
Description
The cafe was located— I'd use the full name ("Bridges cafe") to lead off the first sentence.
as of 2012— Nothing more recent?
History
Bridges opened in late 1990s— Missing "the". Also, no source that's more specific?
Bridget Bayer— Bridget, huh. I suppose that's where the café got its name, but is there a source for that?
purchased by Tom and Laura Lane-Ruckman.— Any idea when? Also, there's an extra space in the following sentence right before the citation.
"[established— Missing a close bracket.
However, the business fell behind on rent and— Perhaps "The business fell behind on rent, however, and"
Bridges [] close[d] permanently on November 15, 2020, after operating for approximately eighteen years.— The math doesn't work if it opened in the late 1990s. And maybe mention that November 15 was a Sunday, though it's a small point.
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She considered— It's generally good practice to avoid stating what people think (which we can only guess at—at best, we know what she said she thought), and instead state what people said.
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"Bridget Bayer" "Bridges Cafe". See 1, 2, 3 (these three are paywalled, but if you open them and quickly click "Esc", you can read them), 4 (among other things, "Bridget: Yes, I opened Bridges in 1994 and sold it in 2000."). The Los Angeles Times piece, plus the two newspapers.com articles I clipped above, suggest there might be some material to be added about beer brewing as well. You might also Google
"Lane-Ruckman" "Bridges Cafe". -- Usernameunique ( talk) 04:56, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Usernameunique ( talk · contribs) 01:51, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
Lead
the cafe was purchased by Tom and Laura Lane-Ruckman— "soon purchased"? But only if there's a cite.
Description
The cafe was located— I'd use the full name ("Bridges cafe") to lead off the first sentence.
as of 2012— Nothing more recent?
History
Bridges opened in late 1990s— Missing "the". Also, no source that's more specific?
Bridget Bayer— Bridget, huh. I suppose that's where the café got its name, but is there a source for that?
purchased by Tom and Laura Lane-Ruckman.— Any idea when? Also, there's an extra space in the following sentence right before the citation.
"[established— Missing a close bracket.
However, the business fell behind on rent and— Perhaps "The business fell behind on rent, however, and"
Bridges [] close[d] permanently on November 15, 2020, after operating for approximately eighteen years.— The math doesn't work if it opened in the late 1990s. And maybe mention that November 15 was a Sunday, though it's a small point.
Reception
She considered— It's generally good practice to avoid stating what people think (which we can only guess at—at best, we know what she said she thought), and instead state what people said.
Images
References
Overall
"Bridget Bayer" "Bridges Cafe". See 1, 2, 3 (these three are paywalled, but if you open them and quickly click "Esc", you can read them), 4 (among other things, "Bridget: Yes, I opened Bridges in 1994 and sold it in 2000."). The Los Angeles Times piece, plus the two newspapers.com articles I clipped above, suggest there might be some material to be added about beer brewing as well. You might also Google
"Lane-Ruckman" "Bridges Cafe". -- Usernameunique ( talk) 04:56, 1 March 2021 (UTC)