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First off, great work on the article. User:Trust Is All You Need, please consider joining Wikipedia:WikiProject United States presidential elections.
Reviewer: William S. Saturn ( talk) 23:27, 5 November 2009 (UTC)
Since the WP:GAN process allows for outside comments, I have to make one here. What is this article doing as a GA nominee? It was only created ten days ago, and still has an 'under construction' tag on it. It thus fails the stability requirement right off the bat. In its current state it has organizational problems, some reliability-of-source problems, and some gross typos ("writing status"). It will become an interesting article, and it would have been a good entry for WP:DYK if it were done within five days, but I can't see how it belongs at GAN right now. Wasted Time R ( talk) 12:21, 7 November 2009 (UTC)
Reviewer: H1nkles citius altius fortius 15:52, 6 April 2010 (UTC)
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I feel toward the end of the "Position and Beliefs" section, it is plainly clear that the usage of quotes there is to mock the candidate. His quote should either be pulled directly from the source or the quotes removed entirely, instead using more unbiased wording. 174.50.6.64 ( talk) 23:55, 2 November 2010 (UTC)
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I will review this article.
First off, great work on the article. User:Trust Is All You Need, please consider joining Wikipedia:WikiProject United States presidential elections.
Reviewer: William S. Saturn ( talk) 23:27, 5 November 2009 (UTC)
Since the WP:GAN process allows for outside comments, I have to make one here. What is this article doing as a GA nominee? It was only created ten days ago, and still has an 'under construction' tag on it. It thus fails the stability requirement right off the bat. In its current state it has organizational problems, some reliability-of-source problems, and some gross typos ("writing status"). It will become an interesting article, and it would have been a good entry for WP:DYK if it were done within five days, but I can't see how it belongs at GAN right now. Wasted Time R ( talk) 12:21, 7 November 2009 (UTC)
Reviewer: H1nkles citius altius fortius 15:52, 6 April 2010 (UTC)
When I do an article review I like to provide a Heading-by-Heading breakdown of suggestions for how to make the article better. It is done in good faith as a means to improve the article. It does not necessarily mean that the article is not GA quality, or that the issues listed are keeping it from GA approval. I also undertake minor grammatical and prose edits. After I finish this part of the review I will look at the over arching quality of the article in light of the GA criteria and make my determination as to whether it is GA quality.
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
I feel toward the end of the "Position and Beliefs" section, it is plainly clear that the usage of quotes there is to mock the candidate. His quote should either be pulled directly from the source or the quotes removed entirely, instead using more unbiased wording. 174.50.6.64 ( talk) 23:55, 2 November 2010 (UTC)
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