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I am a close relative of Brian, and some of the information provided here about his ancestry and parentage is incorrect.
Brian's father, William Haberlin, was indeed from Hawaii, but his ancestors had no discernible Hawaiian blood, rather being descendants of Portuguese laborers. Brian's mother, Mildred Copley, was born in Maine (NOT New Hampshire) to an American family of aristocratic British descent. She was mostly of English, Scottish and Irish descent, not Swedish-Irish. ZalgoApproaches ( talk) 09:00, 13 February 2012 (UTC)
<Much of the content provided reads as a marketing/sales page written with extraneous information from a subjective, non-neutral and biased perspective. Additionally much of the content was taken out of context for the source material provided. Content and information have been changed/adjusted to read as more factual with a neutral tone containing verifiable / non-biased sources, while matching similar wikipedia pages on biographies of living people.> Slacker13 ( talk) 16:20, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
@ Slacker13: I've reverted your two edits, in which you deleted one third of the content of this article. I don't agree with your rationale, above; but, equally, because you deleted so much in a single edit, it is hard to see the wood for the trees.
Could I suggest, if you wish to address supposed issues on this article, that you work sentence by sentence or paragraph by paragraph, making a series of small edits, rather than making a single huge change. That will allow other edits to better understand what you are doing, and why you are doing it. Please specify your specific objection to text removed in the edit summary.
Here, for instance, it is not clear which parts of the article have been removed because they are uncited; which because you view tham as "extraneous", which because you view them as "subjective, non-neutral or biased", which because they are in your opinion "out of context" &c.
In general, across wikipedia, please do not make sweeping changes to articles in a single edit, but instead do it piecemeal so that other editors can understand what you are doing. -- Tagishsimon ( talk) 03:45, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
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I am a close relative of Brian, and some of the information provided here about his ancestry and parentage is incorrect.
Brian's father, William Haberlin, was indeed from Hawaii, but his ancestors had no discernible Hawaiian blood, rather being descendants of Portuguese laborers. Brian's mother, Mildred Copley, was born in Maine (NOT New Hampshire) to an American family of aristocratic British descent. She was mostly of English, Scottish and Irish descent, not Swedish-Irish. ZalgoApproaches ( talk) 09:00, 13 February 2012 (UTC)
<Much of the content provided reads as a marketing/sales page written with extraneous information from a subjective, non-neutral and biased perspective. Additionally much of the content was taken out of context for the source material provided. Content and information have been changed/adjusted to read as more factual with a neutral tone containing verifiable / non-biased sources, while matching similar wikipedia pages on biographies of living people.> Slacker13 ( talk) 16:20, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
@ Slacker13: I've reverted your two edits, in which you deleted one third of the content of this article. I don't agree with your rationale, above; but, equally, because you deleted so much in a single edit, it is hard to see the wood for the trees.
Could I suggest, if you wish to address supposed issues on this article, that you work sentence by sentence or paragraph by paragraph, making a series of small edits, rather than making a single huge change. That will allow other edits to better understand what you are doing, and why you are doing it. Please specify your specific objection to text removed in the edit summary.
Here, for instance, it is not clear which parts of the article have been removed because they are uncited; which because you view tham as "extraneous", which because you view them as "subjective, non-neutral or biased", which because they are in your opinion "out of context" &c.
In general, across wikipedia, please do not make sweeping changes to articles in a single edit, but instead do it piecemeal so that other editors can understand what you are doing. -- Tagishsimon ( talk) 03:45, 12 December 2023 (UTC)