was well received → garnered positive reviews Done
Background and release
You can link DJ Frank E as it is the first time he is mentioned in the body of prose. Done
Link synth Done
and three remixes of "Breathing" → Because of how you have constructed this sentence, you need a comma after "Breathing" Done
Composition
According to the digital sheet music published at Musicnotes.com by Universal Music Publishing Group, → Not needed, remove. Done
and contains elements of the song "Pilentze Pee", → In the lead you say sample. Done
As quite a lot of this section is about the lyrics, I'd change this section to "Composition and lyrics". Done
Critical reception
This is full of quotes. Can you paraphrase some? I'd try the quote - paraphrased quote - quote method lol. Done
Chart performance
eventually certified → Remove "eventually" Done
Music video
No issues.
Live performances and cover versions
No issues.
Track listing
I'd change this to "Formats and track listings" as there are different formats in which it was available. Done
Credits and personnel
No issues
Charts and certifications
The Weekly Charts table isn't weekly if you include two different years, that yearly. Also, 2011 peaks should be on one table, 2012 peaks in the other table. Done
Release history
I did a slight c/e of the tables.
Could you add a Label column too. Done
References
Check for words that are in capitals, they should just be written normally. (FN46) Done
Summary
Quite impressed! References are practically perfect. Article is really well written. Good job! On hold
was well received → garnered positive reviews Done
Background and release
You can link DJ Frank E as it is the first time he is mentioned in the body of prose. Done
Link synth Done
and three remixes of "Breathing" → Because of how you have constructed this sentence, you need a comma after "Breathing" Done
Composition
According to the digital sheet music published at Musicnotes.com by Universal Music Publishing Group, → Not needed, remove. Done
and contains elements of the song "Pilentze Pee", → In the lead you say sample. Done
As quite a lot of this section is about the lyrics, I'd change this section to "Composition and lyrics". Done
Critical reception
This is full of quotes. Can you paraphrase some? I'd try the quote - paraphrased quote - quote method lol. Done
Chart performance
eventually certified → Remove "eventually" Done
Music video
No issues.
Live performances and cover versions
No issues.
Track listing
I'd change this to "Formats and track listings" as there are different formats in which it was available. Done
Credits and personnel
No issues
Charts and certifications
The Weekly Charts table isn't weekly if you include two different years, that yearly. Also, 2011 peaks should be on one table, 2012 peaks in the other table. Done
Release history
I did a slight c/e of the tables.
Could you add a Label column too. Done
References
Check for words that are in capitals, they should just be written normally. (FN46) Done
Summary
Quite impressed! References are practically perfect. Article is really well written. Good job! On hold