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Suggested changes have been implemented, as far as they are understood. Pictures have been added as illustrations. The citations linked through Google mention the company or its watches by name only, and provide no substantive information. The "Arts of Asia" article looks very useful, but it may take a few months before I am able to view it. It appears that all of your suggestions have been addressed. I will re-nominate. Zoticogrillo ( talk) 03:28, 6 February 2009 (UTC)
Thank you for your many useful and detailed suggestions. In addition, I have the following responses:
Images - Research on source of the ad is ongoing. I have the original photo which includes part of the rest of the publication, which includes article excerpts relating progress of the war in Europe (WWII).
POV - The descriptive language is arguably appropriate in this context. The watches produced by this company range in price from USD $30,000 to 1.8 million. This same language is found in other articles describing high quality products such as Ferrari. The language is merely descriptive, as these watches are individually hand crafted (or hand painted, engraved, etc.) by artists. The whole paragraph is supported by the source near the end of the paragraph. It would have been too repetitive to add that same footnote after every single clause.
Watches section - Not sure to which citation you are pointing... footnote 33? Those citations support the statement and they are well known associations entirely independent of Bovet.
References - There is nothing "prima facie" wrong with a self-published website. A self-published cite should not be a problem. Its claims are generally supported by other citations (or do not contradict such), and the website has general credibility and evidence of honest research. The author has no connect whatsoever to editing this article, and it is an independent source. I have contacted the individuals listed as supporting contributors. They are responsive to inquiries and are collector/experts on European watches. Zoticogrillo ( talk) 00:15, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
ON HOLD for a week. Hopefully that gives you a good list of additional things to work on. Jclemens ( talk) 03:34, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
Ok. This process doesn't help the article if it drags on with little change. since only some of my comments and few of the second opinion reviewer comments have been addressed (and it has been 10 days since the second opinion), I'm not going to promote this article. Fix the issues outlined by the two reviewers and this article will do well at GAN. Protonk ( talk) 03:30, 19 August 2008 (UTC)
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Suggested changes have been implemented, as far as they are understood. Pictures have been added as illustrations. The citations linked through Google mention the company or its watches by name only, and provide no substantive information. The "Arts of Asia" article looks very useful, but it may take a few months before I am able to view it. It appears that all of your suggestions have been addressed. I will re-nominate. Zoticogrillo ( talk) 03:28, 6 February 2009 (UTC)
Thank you for your many useful and detailed suggestions. In addition, I have the following responses:
Images - Research on source of the ad is ongoing. I have the original photo which includes part of the rest of the publication, which includes article excerpts relating progress of the war in Europe (WWII).
POV - The descriptive language is arguably appropriate in this context. The watches produced by this company range in price from USD $30,000 to 1.8 million. This same language is found in other articles describing high quality products such as Ferrari. The language is merely descriptive, as these watches are individually hand crafted (or hand painted, engraved, etc.) by artists. The whole paragraph is supported by the source near the end of the paragraph. It would have been too repetitive to add that same footnote after every single clause.
Watches section - Not sure to which citation you are pointing... footnote 33? Those citations support the statement and they are well known associations entirely independent of Bovet.
References - There is nothing "prima facie" wrong with a self-published website. A self-published cite should not be a problem. Its claims are generally supported by other citations (or do not contradict such), and the website has general credibility and evidence of honest research. The author has no connect whatsoever to editing this article, and it is an independent source. I have contacted the individuals listed as supporting contributors. They are responsive to inquiries and are collector/experts on European watches. Zoticogrillo ( talk) 00:15, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
ON HOLD for a week. Hopefully that gives you a good list of additional things to work on. Jclemens ( talk) 03:34, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
Ok. This process doesn't help the article if it drags on with little change. since only some of my comments and few of the second opinion reviewer comments have been addressed (and it has been 10 days since the second opinion), I'm not going to promote this article. Fix the issues outlined by the two reviewers and this article will do well at GAN. Protonk ( talk) 03:30, 19 August 2008 (UTC)
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