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Reviewer: Calvin999 ( talk · contribs) 23:41, 19 June 2012 (UTC) reply

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):
    b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c ( OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

· · ·

Info box

  • No issues.

Lead

  • Add the record label at the end of the opening sentence.
  • yet one can hear influences of Europop, techno, and dubstep within the composition. → ; there are also influences of Europop, techno, and dubstep within the composition.

Background

  • No issues.

Composition

  • Foster the People remixed "The Edge of Glory" and introduced a new break down from the 3:20 time sequence. → Source?
  • Not much change is apparent → Reword
  • "Scheiße" featured influences from The Knife song "Heartbeats" (2003) as well as Vengaboys' "We Like to Party" (1999). → Source?
  • Not much change goes into the → Reword
  • I like how you go through each song, but some parts need rewording.

Critical reception

  • No issues. This section is generally well written.

Chart performance

  • No issues.

Track listing

  • No issues.

Credits and personnel

  • No issues.

Charts and certifications

  • No issues.

Release history

  • No issues.

References

Summary

Good work, not many issues to fix. A well written article. On hold for 7 days. Aaron You Da One 16:11, 22 June 2012 (UTC) reply

Sorry about the lengthy wait, passing. Aaron You Da One 21:38, 6 July 2012 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Calvin999 ( talk · contribs) 23:41, 19 June 2012 (UTC) reply

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):
    b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c ( OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

· · ·

Info box

  • No issues.

Lead

  • Add the record label at the end of the opening sentence.
  • yet one can hear influences of Europop, techno, and dubstep within the composition. → ; there are also influences of Europop, techno, and dubstep within the composition.

Background

  • No issues.

Composition

  • Foster the People remixed "The Edge of Glory" and introduced a new break down from the 3:20 time sequence. → Source?
  • Not much change is apparent → Reword
  • "Scheiße" featured influences from The Knife song "Heartbeats" (2003) as well as Vengaboys' "We Like to Party" (1999). → Source?
  • Not much change goes into the → Reword
  • I like how you go through each song, but some parts need rewording.

Critical reception

  • No issues. This section is generally well written.

Chart performance

  • No issues.

Track listing

  • No issues.

Credits and personnel

  • No issues.

Charts and certifications

  • No issues.

Release history

  • No issues.

References

Summary

Good work, not many issues to fix. A well written article. On hold for 7 days. Aaron You Da One 16:11, 22 June 2012 (UTC) reply

Sorry about the lengthy wait, passing. Aaron You Da One 21:38, 6 July 2012 (UTC) reply

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