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Reviewer: What a pro. ( talk · contribs) 09:43, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
Lead/Infobox/Background
- No cover?
- Christian labels usually don't bother to make a cover for anything beyond the first single, since they can just promote the single to radio and let people buy the song off of the album on iTunes. Toa Nidhiki 05 15:40, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
- Recorded in various locations Which ones?
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki 05 15:40, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
- 52nd Grammy Awards - the Grammy Award for Best Gospel Song and... I don't think the hyphen is needed. Just use a colon.
- No need to link Third Day again.
Composition
- Join the two paragraphs. They're pretty short anyway.
- No need to link Lacey Mosley, ballad, folk music, alternative metal, and pop music again.
- Don't capitalize "born" in "born again".
- folk-flavored ballad... which Add a space before the ellipsis.
- Citation 3 should be after "Flyleaf", not "and".
- End the sentence after which beautifully features Lacey Mosley from Flyleaf.
- Don't link Flyleaf again.
Reception
- chart week of June 13, 2009. Date-Month-Year is used for the references, so it should be used here.
- Don't capitalize "No."
- Don't link the chart names again.
Live performances/Other uses/References
- All dates should be in DMY.
- At WinterJam#Winter Jam 2010, Pipe the link!
- Put the "other uses" sentence in another section, maybe the lead.
- Good idea, done. Toa Nidhiki 05 16:02, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
- Reference 12 should be in DMY.
- Citations that have a chart search should have a note.
- That was just a formatting mistake in the citation, which I fixed. Toa Nidhiki 05 16:02, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
Once these concerns have been addressed, I will pass the article. What a pro ( talk, contribs) is on fire. 09:43, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
- Is it good now?
Toa
Nidhiki
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16:02, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
- Yup, passing it now. What a pro ( talk, contribs) is on fire. 00:59, 19 March 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: What a pro. ( talk · contribs) 09:43, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
Lead/Infobox/Background
- No cover?
- Christian labels usually don't bother to make a cover for anything beyond the first single, since they can just promote the single to radio and let people buy the song off of the album on iTunes. Toa Nidhiki 05 15:40, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
- Recorded in various locations Which ones?
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki 05 15:40, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
- 52nd Grammy Awards - the Grammy Award for Best Gospel Song and... I don't think the hyphen is needed. Just use a colon.
- No need to link Third Day again.
Composition
- Join the two paragraphs. They're pretty short anyway.
- No need to link Lacey Mosley, ballad, folk music, alternative metal, and pop music again.
- Don't capitalize "born" in "born again".
- folk-flavored ballad... which Add a space before the ellipsis.
- Citation 3 should be after "Flyleaf", not "and".
- End the sentence after which beautifully features Lacey Mosley from Flyleaf.
- Don't link Flyleaf again.
Reception
- chart week of June 13, 2009. Date-Month-Year is used for the references, so it should be used here.
- Don't capitalize "No."
- Don't link the chart names again.
Live performances/Other uses/References
- All dates should be in DMY.
- At WinterJam#Winter Jam 2010, Pipe the link!
- Put the "other uses" sentence in another section, maybe the lead.
- Good idea, done. Toa Nidhiki 05 16:02, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
- Reference 12 should be in DMY.
- Citations that have a chart search should have a note.
- That was just a formatting mistake in the citation, which I fixed. Toa Nidhiki 05 16:02, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
Once these concerns have been addressed, I will pass the article. What a pro ( talk, contribs) is on fire. 09:43, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
- Is it good now?
Toa
Nidhiki
05
16:02, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
- Yup, passing it now. What a pro ( talk, contribs) is on fire. 00:59, 19 March 2012 (UTC)