Made edits per your suggestions, thanks for your review! The only one I did not make was the "unnecessarily elaborate" change, as it is my understanding that that is a well-attested and uncontroversial claim about the bookwheel. See for instance
this page which discusses "design for showmanship's sake" with additional sourced statements.
Geethree (
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01:27, 27 January 2015 (UTC)reply
Made edits per your suggestions, thanks for your review! The only one I did not make was the "unnecessarily elaborate" change, as it is my understanding that that is a well-attested and uncontroversial claim about the bookwheel. See for instance
this page which discusses "design for showmanship's sake" with additional sourced statements.
Geethree (
talk)
01:27, 27 January 2015 (UTC)reply