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Reviewer: TheSandDoctor ( talk · contribs) 20:34, 8 August 2017 (UTC)
Bohemia Interactive? They develop one of my favourite video games, ArmA 3 - will definitely review this. Stand by. -- TheSandDoctor ( talk) 20:34, 8 August 2017 (UTC) "The team also bought a T-72 tank in order to express gratitude" - there is no problem with this line, I just thought I would bring it up as it really seems bizarre. I would seriously recommend nominating this article for DYK once it is approved and having that as a suggested hook - seriously.
That's all - I really like what has been done with this article so far and think that, with these changes, the article will pass GA and would even recommend inquiring about FA. The majority of the above concerns revolve around bringing citations already present closer (as mentioned in some of the above), but there are also some where the citations given do not match the content (might have been put backwards as I found it further down in different area?).
@ AdrianGamer: Until these issues are addressed, I am placing this nomination On hold. I realize that you may not be back yet from your vacation so, as with Rainbow 6 siege, I am happy to wait or have these go through one at a time (I am in no hurry). -- TheSandDoctor ( talk) 21:14, 8 August 2017 (UTC)
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Reviewer: TheSandDoctor ( talk · contribs) 20:34, 8 August 2017 (UTC)
Bohemia Interactive? They develop one of my favourite video games, ArmA 3 - will definitely review this. Stand by. -- TheSandDoctor ( talk) 20:34, 8 August 2017 (UTC) "The team also bought a T-72 tank in order to express gratitude" - there is no problem with this line, I just thought I would bring it up as it really seems bizarre. I would seriously recommend nominating this article for DYK once it is approved and having that as a suggested hook - seriously.
That's all - I really like what has been done with this article so far and think that, with these changes, the article will pass GA and would even recommend inquiring about FA. The majority of the above concerns revolve around bringing citations already present closer (as mentioned in some of the above), but there are also some where the citations given do not match the content (might have been put backwards as I found it further down in different area?).
@ AdrianGamer: Until these issues are addressed, I am placing this nomination On hold. I realize that you may not be back yet from your vacation so, as with Rainbow 6 siege, I am happy to wait or have these go through one at a time (I am in no hurry). -- TheSandDoctor ( talk) 21:14, 8 August 2017 (UTC)