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Reviewer: TBrandley ( talk · contribs) 23:40, 7 November 2012 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing this one! TBr and ley 23:40, 7 November 2012 (UTC)
How's it coming? Wizardman 05:41, 17 November 2012 (UTC)
Overall; good job. Once the above issues are addressed, I will pass the article based on the good article criteria. TBr and ley 05:58, 17 November 2012 (UTC)
Issues mostly fixed. For fielding percentages, and most percentages in baseball, they are listed as .444, rather than 0.444; there are a couple exceptions with pitchers, but he's not one. Adding an extra link to the image doesn't make sense to me, especially since the Milwaukee team in question is linked right by the image. As Lowe's an American playing american baseball, I don't see the dollar link as being necessary. The book reference is Ref #4 and repeated later. I'm not really a fan of that ref format myself so I can split that out if needed. Everything else I think i got. Wizardman 03:17, 20 November 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: TBrandley ( talk · contribs) 23:40, 7 November 2012 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing this one! TBr and ley 23:40, 7 November 2012 (UTC)
How's it coming? Wizardman 05:41, 17 November 2012 (UTC)
Overall; good job. Once the above issues are addressed, I will pass the article based on the good article criteria. TBr and ley 05:58, 17 November 2012 (UTC)
Issues mostly fixed. For fielding percentages, and most percentages in baseball, they are listed as .444, rather than 0.444; there are a couple exceptions with pitchers, but he's not one. Adding an extra link to the image doesn't make sense to me, especially since the Milwaukee team in question is linked right by the image. As Lowe's an American playing american baseball, I don't see the dollar link as being necessary. The book reference is Ref #4 and repeated later. I'm not really a fan of that ref format myself so I can split that out if needed. Everything else I think i got. Wizardman 03:17, 20 November 2012 (UTC)