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Reviewer: Wizardman ( talk · contribs) 14:15, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
Since the article hasn't had good luck getting an actual review, I'll provide one. Will take a few days since my editing's still getting back to normal. Wizardman 14:15, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
Just noticed the writer's last edit was December 9, so I won't worry about trying to rush through this. I'll do the other sections gradually, though I'll try not to go too slow. Wizardman 23:41, 21 December 2012 (UTC)
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The article was a bit tough to review, since some areas have great prose while other spots just fall flat. It's a lot more inconsistent then I'd expect from one person writing it. I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 01:33, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
I looked through some military stuff for Lemon, and little comes up. There's enough to add a sentence or two, but it's not a glaring hole in the article like it would be for Feller. While I'm not comfortable with it FA-wise yet, it does pass all GA criteria, so I'll pass it. Wizardman 03:16, 5 January 2013 (UTC)
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How come there is no mention of this in the article? It is mentioned in his obituary in the NY Times.
https://www.nytimes.com/2000/01/13/sports/bob-lemon-79-a-hall-of-fame-pitcher-dies.html
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Reviewer: Wizardman ( talk · contribs) 14:15, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
Since the article hasn't had good luck getting an actual review, I'll provide one. Will take a few days since my editing's still getting back to normal. Wizardman 14:15, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
Just noticed the writer's last edit was December 9, so I won't worry about trying to rush through this. I'll do the other sections gradually, though I'll try not to go too slow. Wizardman 23:41, 21 December 2012 (UTC)
Here are the issues in the lead and early life sections:
Here are the issues for Major League career:
Here are the issues for everything after:
The article was a bit tough to review, since some areas have great prose while other spots just fall flat. It's a lot more inconsistent then I'd expect from one person writing it. I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 01:33, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
I looked through some military stuff for Lemon, and little comes up. There's enough to add a sentence or two, but it's not a glaring hole in the article like it would be for Feller. While I'm not comfortable with it FA-wise yet, it does pass all GA criteria, so I'll pass it. Wizardman 03:16, 5 January 2013 (UTC)
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How come there is no mention of this in the article? It is mentioned in his obituary in the NY Times.
https://www.nytimes.com/2000/01/13/sports/bob-lemon-79-a-hall-of-fame-pitcher-dies.html