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The subheadings below relate to the Good Article criteria at WP:Reviewing_good_articles#How_to_review_an_article and I shall place comments as I proceed.
I find the article to be mostly well written, I made some minor edits to improve the readability. Please check to make sure that I entered no errors.
Larry Latham and Wayne Farris : Can you cite a date when they were paired? Jezhotwells ( talk) 00:35, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
I find the article well referenced, with the exception of ref #16 < http://www.kappapublishing.com/wrestling/pages/wrestlingframe.html> which was dead when examined. I have placed a tag. I was unable to establish how theses references met the standards of WP:RS, but in the context of a sport/entertainment not well covered in mainstream media, I judge them to be acceptable. Jezhotwells ( talk) 00:35, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
I have doubts about broad coverage. This link for instance [1] appears to reference other teams known variously as Blond or Blonde Bombers. In this link [2] the term is used to describe the Australian Cricket team. In this link [3] it appears to be a nickname for baseball players. Have you considered moving the article to Blond Bombers (Pro Wrestling) or a similar name?
I also feel that an external links section might be a good idea, if suitable links not previously used can be found. Jezhotwells ( talk) 01:03, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
I hame happy that this artcile conforms to a Neutral Point of View Jezhotwells ( talk) 00:50, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
The article is stable with the majority of edits by the creator and nominator. Jezhotwells ( talk) 00:51, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
No images are used in this article. Have you tried to source some acceptable, i.e. free license images? Jezhotwells ( talk) 00:58, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
Given the notability of the subject, I think this article should meet the good article criteria if the few points mentioned above are addressed. Jezhotwells ( talk) 01:01, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
Thanks for the review. Although I was sure I had searched everywhere for more teams known as the Blond/Blonde Bombers. The link you provided is quite right. Stan Lane and Bryan St. John apparently also used the name. They were only together for a little over a year, but it's definitely still worth making a section for them, and I have some good sources available. I have replaced the dead link (the company seems to have moved its information to a different domain name but kept it all intact). I'll try to get these issues resolved over the weekend. Thanks again, GaryColemanFan ( talk) 01:20, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
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Jezhotwells (
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The subheadings below relate to the Good Article criteria at WP:Reviewing_good_articles#How_to_review_an_article and I shall place comments as I proceed.
I find the article to be mostly well written, I made some minor edits to improve the readability. Please check to make sure that I entered no errors.
Larry Latham and Wayne Farris : Can you cite a date when they were paired? Jezhotwells ( talk) 00:35, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
I find the article well referenced, with the exception of ref #16 < http://www.kappapublishing.com/wrestling/pages/wrestlingframe.html> which was dead when examined. I have placed a tag. I was unable to establish how theses references met the standards of WP:RS, but in the context of a sport/entertainment not well covered in mainstream media, I judge them to be acceptable. Jezhotwells ( talk) 00:35, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
I have doubts about broad coverage. This link for instance [1] appears to reference other teams known variously as Blond or Blonde Bombers. In this link [2] the term is used to describe the Australian Cricket team. In this link [3] it appears to be a nickname for baseball players. Have you considered moving the article to Blond Bombers (Pro Wrestling) or a similar name?
I also feel that an external links section might be a good idea, if suitable links not previously used can be found. Jezhotwells ( talk) 01:03, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
I hame happy that this artcile conforms to a Neutral Point of View Jezhotwells ( talk) 00:50, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
The article is stable with the majority of edits by the creator and nominator. Jezhotwells ( talk) 00:51, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
No images are used in this article. Have you tried to source some acceptable, i.e. free license images? Jezhotwells ( talk) 00:58, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
Given the notability of the subject, I think this article should meet the good article criteria if the few points mentioned above are addressed. Jezhotwells ( talk) 01:01, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
Thanks for the review. Although I was sure I had searched everywhere for more teams known as the Blond/Blonde Bombers. The link you provided is quite right. Stan Lane and Bryan St. John apparently also used the name. They were only together for a little over a year, but it's definitely still worth making a section for them, and I have some good sources available. I have replaced the dead link (the company seems to have moved its information to a different domain name but kept it all intact). I'll try to get these issues resolved over the weekend. Thanks again, GaryColemanFan ( talk) 01:20, 28 March 2009 (UTC)