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Reviewer: Kees08 ( talk · contribs) 05:11, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
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I will be reviewing this over the next week. Glanced over it, can probably complete it pretty quickly. Overall looks like it is in really good shape as is! Kees08 ( talk) 05:11, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
6a: Recommend using Template:Non-free use rationale album cover for this image Kees08 ( talk) 04:59, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
Recommend removing See Also section, as the link there is already incorporated into the article.
Recommend removing less notable reviews, such as making a BuzzFeed list.
Recommend finding more negative reviews, if possible, as the review section only had one negative review in it. (I understand this album is in general highly regarded, but surely there was more than one negative review)
Recommend rewording this: "Soon after starting the recording sessions of Bleed American, the band met the head of DreamWorks Records Artists and repertoire division, who offered to help the band. The band considered it, but it was not until a year later when they returned to contact him."
Third paragraph of Lyrical themes and musical style notes many different artists lines that were used in A Praise Chorus; the track listing section only mentions one of those bands. Solve that however you want. Kees08 ( talk) 04:59, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
Consider adding that Mark Trombino produced Dude Ranch and that it went platinum in the Recording section.
Add lengths to tracks in bonus tracks.
@ DannyMusicEditor: That's it! Address citations, and at least respond to the points above. I do not expect you to agree with me on every point, just let me know if any of them are unreasonable. Thanks! Kees08 ( talk) 05:48, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
Kees08, I don't agree with all the tags you've added; citations are not necessary after every sentence (I learned that from a much more experienced editor than even me). They must be at least at the end of every paragraph, if it covers everything in there; if not, it's nice to cite a bit more. They can cover multiple sentences like I have here. Also, what clarity would you like on the booklet? dannymusiceditor Speak up! 21:33, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
@ Kees08: I believe all concerns are addressed. dannymusiceditor Speak up! 20:34, 5 October 2016 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Kees08 ( talk · contribs) 05:11, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
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I will be reviewing this over the next week. Glanced over it, can probably complete it pretty quickly. Overall looks like it is in really good shape as is! Kees08 ( talk) 05:11, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
6a: Recommend using Template:Non-free use rationale album cover for this image Kees08 ( talk) 04:59, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
Recommend removing See Also section, as the link there is already incorporated into the article.
Recommend removing less notable reviews, such as making a BuzzFeed list.
Recommend finding more negative reviews, if possible, as the review section only had one negative review in it. (I understand this album is in general highly regarded, but surely there was more than one negative review)
Recommend rewording this: "Soon after starting the recording sessions of Bleed American, the band met the head of DreamWorks Records Artists and repertoire division, who offered to help the band. The band considered it, but it was not until a year later when they returned to contact him."
Third paragraph of Lyrical themes and musical style notes many different artists lines that were used in A Praise Chorus; the track listing section only mentions one of those bands. Solve that however you want. Kees08 ( talk) 04:59, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
Consider adding that Mark Trombino produced Dude Ranch and that it went platinum in the Recording section.
Add lengths to tracks in bonus tracks.
@ DannyMusicEditor: That's it! Address citations, and at least respond to the points above. I do not expect you to agree with me on every point, just let me know if any of them are unreasonable. Thanks! Kees08 ( talk) 05:48, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
Kees08, I don't agree with all the tags you've added; citations are not necessary after every sentence (I learned that from a much more experienced editor than even me). They must be at least at the end of every paragraph, if it covers everything in there; if not, it's nice to cite a bit more. They can cover multiple sentences like I have here. Also, what clarity would you like on the booklet? dannymusiceditor Speak up! 21:33, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
@ Kees08: I believe all concerns are addressed. dannymusiceditor Speak up! 20:34, 5 October 2016 (UTC)