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This article seems to be written with a heavily promotional tone. It goes out of its way to assert notability (even calls itself "notable" four times!) and is written in a rather glowing tone. Much, if not all, of the popularity section needs to be trimmed or removed as being largely irrelevant to the article and coming across more as "fluff" material to cast the company in as positive a light as it can.
I am tagging this and bringing it up in the talk instead of making the modifications myself due to heavy editing by a couple of editors who are clearly interested in the topic, and wanting to allow them a chance to voice their opinions on the topic before I take a chainsaw to the article. Arkyan • (talk) 17:54, 27 April 2007 (UTC)
Thanks to the anon who did some work to clean up the tone of this article, but I don't think it's ready to have the cleanup tag removed, so I have reinstated it. Just to make sure everyone is on the same page, it'd be great if you (or anyone) commented here on the talk page prior to removing the tag to make sure the concerns are adequately addressed. Thanks! Arkyan • (talk) 23:04, 27 April 2007 (UTC)
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A lot of this article is written like a promotion or company website, so I added to editing banner asking for changes to be made. SpiritedMichelle ( talk) 03:45, 16 March 2018 (UTC)
Just noting that I've pared down a lot of the unnecessary promotional information. This is an indie perfume house - we don't need play-by-play details about every single charitable collaboration they've ever done if we don't even do that for big perfumers like MFK or Creed. Locust Valley ( talk) 00:38, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
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This article seems to be written with a heavily promotional tone. It goes out of its way to assert notability (even calls itself "notable" four times!) and is written in a rather glowing tone. Much, if not all, of the popularity section needs to be trimmed or removed as being largely irrelevant to the article and coming across more as "fluff" material to cast the company in as positive a light as it can.
I am tagging this and bringing it up in the talk instead of making the modifications myself due to heavy editing by a couple of editors who are clearly interested in the topic, and wanting to allow them a chance to voice their opinions on the topic before I take a chainsaw to the article. Arkyan • (talk) 17:54, 27 April 2007 (UTC)
Thanks to the anon who did some work to clean up the tone of this article, but I don't think it's ready to have the cleanup tag removed, so I have reinstated it. Just to make sure everyone is on the same page, it'd be great if you (or anyone) commented here on the talk page prior to removing the tag to make sure the concerns are adequately addressed. Thanks! Arkyan • (talk) 23:04, 27 April 2007 (UTC)
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A lot of this article is written like a promotion or company website, so I added to editing banner asking for changes to be made. SpiritedMichelle ( talk) 03:45, 16 March 2018 (UTC)
Just noting that I've pared down a lot of the unnecessary promotional information. This is an indie perfume house - we don't need play-by-play details about every single charitable collaboration they've ever done if we don't even do that for big perfumers like MFK or Creed. Locust Valley ( talk) 00:38, 24 April 2024 (UTC)