From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: TonyTheTiger ( talk · contribs) 08:51, 16 December 2013 (UTC) reply

WP:LEAD
The modern bikini
Social resistance
Rise to popularity
Mass acceptance
Bikini variants
Variants
Beach volleyball
Bodybuilding
Age appropriateness
Health issues
See also
Hmm
Images

Hello TonyTheTiger briefly - but firstly thank you for reviewing the bikini article. I have been unable to respond to you personally or the article review since last week momentous events occurred effecting our family (but thankfully positive ones!!). I have not even been able to visit Wikipedia but for once, briefly, in the past nine days... I understand the article needs specific improvements but what is the best course of action from this moment forwards? Is it such that the final pass/fail can be delayed for some more days while I try to personally set aside time to edit, or would I want to formally " withdraw" the nomination (so it doesn't automatically fail b/c the changes aren't made timely)? Of course the intent is to make the necessary edits, it's just like I said there was momentous personal events last week that turned this world upside down so I have not been able to follow-up with you before now. Please advise on the best course of action and thank you for your time Az x2 05:17, 24 December 2013 (UTC) reply

ps. I left you the same message on your talking page so is to you where best to reply. Thx!!! Az x2 05:17, 24 December 2013 (UTC) reply

Take your time. RL will happen. I can wait a week or two. Please respond at your earliest convenience.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:26, 24 December 2013 (UTC) reply
If RL has taken over your time for now maybe I should close this review. Let me know if you object.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 15:35, 5 January 2014 (UTC) reply

Comments from other users

Thank you for your feedback on this. Az x2 05:17, 24 December 2013 (UTC) reply
  • I just want to point out that I added a {{citation needed}} tag to the following sentence: "The bikini gradually grew to gain wide acceptance in Western society, though it is still unacceptable in most Muslim countries. Some Muslim countries permit the wearing of a bikini; however, it is usually heavily frowned upon. Other Muslim countries entirely prohibit the wearing of a bikini." - Newyorkadam ( talk) 22:43, 11 January 2014 (UTC)Newyorkadam reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: TonyTheTiger ( talk · contribs) 08:51, 16 December 2013 (UTC) reply

WP:LEAD
The modern bikini
Social resistance
Rise to popularity
Mass acceptance
Bikini variants
Variants
Beach volleyball
Bodybuilding
Age appropriateness
Health issues
See also
Hmm
Images

Hello TonyTheTiger briefly - but firstly thank you for reviewing the bikini article. I have been unable to respond to you personally or the article review since last week momentous events occurred effecting our family (but thankfully positive ones!!). I have not even been able to visit Wikipedia but for once, briefly, in the past nine days... I understand the article needs specific improvements but what is the best course of action from this moment forwards? Is it such that the final pass/fail can be delayed for some more days while I try to personally set aside time to edit, or would I want to formally " withdraw" the nomination (so it doesn't automatically fail b/c the changes aren't made timely)? Of course the intent is to make the necessary edits, it's just like I said there was momentous personal events last week that turned this world upside down so I have not been able to follow-up with you before now. Please advise on the best course of action and thank you for your time Az x2 05:17, 24 December 2013 (UTC) reply

ps. I left you the same message on your talking page so is to you where best to reply. Thx!!! Az x2 05:17, 24 December 2013 (UTC) reply

Take your time. RL will happen. I can wait a week or two. Please respond at your earliest convenience.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:26, 24 December 2013 (UTC) reply
If RL has taken over your time for now maybe I should close this review. Let me know if you object.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 15:35, 5 January 2014 (UTC) reply

Comments from other users

Thank you for your feedback on this. Az x2 05:17, 24 December 2013 (UTC) reply
  • I just want to point out that I added a {{citation needed}} tag to the following sentence: "The bikini gradually grew to gain wide acceptance in Western society, though it is still unacceptable in most Muslim countries. Some Muslim countries permit the wearing of a bikini; however, it is usually heavily frowned upon. Other Muslim countries entirely prohibit the wearing of a bikini." - Newyorkadam ( talk) 22:43, 11 January 2014 (UTC)Newyorkadam reply

Videos

Youtube | Vimeo | Bing

Websites

Google | Yahoo | Bing

Encyclopedia

Google | Yahoo | Bing

Facebook