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Reviewer: Adabow ( talk · contribs) 00:36, 13 December 2010 (UTC) reply

There may be some stuff that I also said in the "Down to Earth" review, and some that I missed there.

Lead

  • Include labels
Labels generally aren't included in articles for songs or singles.
Midi Mafia is linked via the writing paramater. Candy o32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 16:40, 23 December 2010 (UTC) reply

Background and composition

  • "While songwriters Lonny Breaux and Dapo Torimiro also receive writing credits, Midi Mafia and Tormiro produced the track." - rewrite
Done.
  • Include tempo (104 bpm)
Done
  • "to high note of E5" - to the high note
Done
Done. Candy o32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 16:42, 23 December 2010 (UTC) reply

Reception

  • Is Hot Digital Songs notable?
The chartings of singles on the digital and airplay charts is generally included 4 Minutes (Madonna song), as to understand how in charted on the Hot 100.
  • "It dropped off both charts the following week" - which charts? You have listed three beforehand
Moved after US and Canada.
  • Why is the UK slapped at the end?
The song debuted in Canada and the US consecutively, the UK was later. Candy o32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 16:45, 23 December 2010 (UTC) reply

OK, passing now. Adabow ( talk · contribs) 19:36, 23 December 2010 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Adabow ( talk · contribs) 00:36, 13 December 2010 (UTC) reply

There may be some stuff that I also said in the "Down to Earth" review, and some that I missed there.

Lead

  • Include labels
Labels generally aren't included in articles for songs or singles.
Midi Mafia is linked via the writing paramater. Candy o32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 16:40, 23 December 2010 (UTC) reply

Background and composition

  • "While songwriters Lonny Breaux and Dapo Torimiro also receive writing credits, Midi Mafia and Tormiro produced the track." - rewrite
Done.
  • Include tempo (104 bpm)
Done
  • "to high note of E5" - to the high note
Done
Done. Candy o32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 16:42, 23 December 2010 (UTC) reply

Reception

  • Is Hot Digital Songs notable?
The chartings of singles on the digital and airplay charts is generally included 4 Minutes (Madonna song), as to understand how in charted on the Hot 100.
  • "It dropped off both charts the following week" - which charts? You have listed three beforehand
Moved after US and Canada.
  • Why is the UK slapped at the end?
The song debuted in Canada and the US consecutively, the UK was later. Candy o32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 16:45, 23 December 2010 (UTC) reply

OK, passing now. Adabow ( talk · contribs) 19:36, 23 December 2010 (UTC) reply


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