This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
In the Schism section, "In 1859", "In 1872", and "1879" it would be best if there was a comma placed after 1859, 1872, and 1879. Same thing in for the Move to current building, Jacob Joseph and Post-Joseph era section.
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
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cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Thanks for the thorough review. Re: 1a, I've inserted commas as suggested, please let me know if any are missing. Regarding 4, this isn't really a contentious point; German Jews at the time were rapidly moving to Reform, whereas Eastern European Jews resisted it. In any event I've quoted the source directly, is that ok?
Jayjg (talk)00:40, 4 August 2008 (UTC)reply
Nope, you've got them all. Oh, well I to me it sounded POVish, but its fine now. I would like to thank Jayjg for getting the stuff I left at the talkpage, cause I have gone off and passed it to GA. Congrats. ;) -- ThinkBlue (HitBLUE)14:29, 4 August 2008 (UTC)reply
This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
In the Schism section, "In 1859", "In 1872", and "1879" it would be best if there was a comma placed after 1859, 1872, and 1879. Same thing in for the Move to current building, Jacob Joseph and Post-Joseph era section.
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Thanks for the thorough review. Re: 1a, I've inserted commas as suggested, please let me know if any are missing. Regarding 4, this isn't really a contentious point; German Jews at the time were rapidly moving to Reform, whereas Eastern European Jews resisted it. In any event I've quoted the source directly, is that ok?
Jayjg (talk)00:40, 4 August 2008 (UTC)reply
Nope, you've got them all. Oh, well I to me it sounded POVish, but its fine now. I would like to thank Jayjg for getting the stuff I left at the talkpage, cause I have gone off and passed it to GA. Congrats. ;) -- ThinkBlue (HitBLUE)14:29, 4 August 2008 (UTC)reply