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Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 15:38, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
Although the evidence that (stopping exposure to beryllium decreases progression of the disease) [verb],... [verb] could be "is inconclusive", "is lacking", "is (not) statistically significant", "is the best ever". I don't know, I don't understand [28], but I see this grammatical error. ( 192.108.24.72 ( talk) 13:53, 20 February 2018 (UTC))
The article surely means to say exposure to the contents of fluorescent lights, right? Delmlsfan ( talk) 21:32, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
The reference linked from "The condition is incurable, but symptoms can be treated" makes no mention of treatment. The External Link to about.com is no longer active. Replaced them both. Fenwayguy ( talk) 02:52, 22 August 2009 (UTC)
Should this article perhaps be merged with Beryllium poisoning? User:MacSpon —Preceding undated comment added 00:17, 21 March 2011 (UTC).
As suggested by User:MacSpon above, it is clear to me that the content of Berylliosis should be merged into Beryllium poisoning because the latter is much more mature. That said, the name "berylliosis" seems preferable, because it is the term most commonly used in reliable sources, such as secondary sources found in PubMed. Therefore, I'm proposing that Berylliosis as the destination with a redirect from Beryllium poisoning. MeSH also has the term "beryllium/toxicity", which could be a redirect as well. -- Scray ( talk) 05:00, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
In response to Andy Dingley's objections, I have changed the header from "Garbage content based on garbage sources" to something more neutral
Jytdog (
talk)
02:38, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
I removed this from lead while I was cleaning up this article in response to
this thread at ANI.
...As an occupational lung disease, it is most classically associated with aerospace manufacturing, beryllium mining or manufacturing of fluorescent light bulbs (which once contained beryllium compounds in their internal phosphor coating). [1] [2]
And it was reverted
here. The first source purports to be some army document, but it is something that has been uploaded to ScribD so who knows where it came from. Someone else saw fit to to add a fake reference to some putative GE report and use that ref to argue about whether Be was ever in fluorescent light bulbs. That is garbage arguing with garbage, One bad source arguing with another (and arguing via citations, for pete's sake) and in the lead of this (yes, per the reverting edit note) important topic. This stuff was discussed no where in the body, and anything that is in the lead should be discussed in the body in detail, and should only be in the lead if it is actually important, per
WP:LEAD. So yes, I deleted this garbage based on garbage sources. I included sourced content in the body about the occupational hazard bit and relevant industries, right in the first section.
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- Jytdog ( talk) 20:49, 29 March 2016 (UTC) (redact per Andy Dingley's objections Jytdog ( talk) 02:38, 2 April 2016 (UTC))
The article says "It is most classically associated with aerospace manufacturing, microwave semiconductor electronics, beryllium mining or manufacturing of fluorescent light bulbs (which once contained beryllium compounds in their internal phosphor coating)."
The part "It is most classically associated" is unclear and it may be unverifiable. See Berylliosis#Classification. QuackGuru ( talk) 21:09, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
Proposal: "It is historically associated with aerospace manufacturing, microwave semiconductor electronics, beryllium mining or manufacturing of fluorescent light bulbs (which once contained beryllium compounds in their internal phosphor coating)." QuackGuru ( talk) 16:22, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
"It long associated with aerospace manufacturing, microwave semiconductor electronics, beryllium mining or manufacturing of fluorescent light bulbs (which once contained beryllium compounds in their internal phosphor coating)."
or
"It associated with aerospace manufacturing, microwave semiconductor electronics, beryllium mining or manufacturing of fluorescent light bulbs (which once contained beryllium compounds in their internal phosphor coating)."
Two proposals: "long associated" or "associated". QuackGuru ( talk) 16:43, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
"Review of medical records of residents surrounding a beryllium facility showed that probable causes of CBD either displayed an abnormal blood test for beryllium and radiographic evidence consistent with disease, or met epidemiological criteria for CBD based on beryllium case registry criteria.[32]" [1] See ( PMID 20386622). QuackGuru ( talk) 21:09, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
The only other mention I can find of meallography is
https://www.engnetglobal.com/tips/glossary.aspx?word=Meallographic+Structure
which I suspect is a misspelling, it makes sense there as metallography, as here. So I have changed our article on this assumption and sent the engnetglobal website an email to confirm whether it is a misspelling. Andrewa ( talk) 13:35, 21 September 2019 (UTC)
USAF Vandenberg Air Force Base 1980's. I was exposed to solid rocket fuel exhaust an experimental launch. I'm looking for information. WebbyScott ( talk) 13:43, 22 March 2020 (UTC)
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Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 15:38, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
Although the evidence that (stopping exposure to beryllium decreases progression of the disease) [verb],... [verb] could be "is inconclusive", "is lacking", "is (not) statistically significant", "is the best ever". I don't know, I don't understand [28], but I see this grammatical error. ( 192.108.24.72 ( talk) 13:53, 20 February 2018 (UTC))
The article surely means to say exposure to the contents of fluorescent lights, right? Delmlsfan ( talk) 21:32, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
The reference linked from "The condition is incurable, but symptoms can be treated" makes no mention of treatment. The External Link to about.com is no longer active. Replaced them both. Fenwayguy ( talk) 02:52, 22 August 2009 (UTC)
Should this article perhaps be merged with Beryllium poisoning? User:MacSpon —Preceding undated comment added 00:17, 21 March 2011 (UTC).
As suggested by User:MacSpon above, it is clear to me that the content of Berylliosis should be merged into Beryllium poisoning because the latter is much more mature. That said, the name "berylliosis" seems preferable, because it is the term most commonly used in reliable sources, such as secondary sources found in PubMed. Therefore, I'm proposing that Berylliosis as the destination with a redirect from Beryllium poisoning. MeSH also has the term "beryllium/toxicity", which could be a redirect as well. -- Scray ( talk) 05:00, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
In response to Andy Dingley's objections, I have changed the header from "Garbage content based on garbage sources" to something more neutral
Jytdog (
talk)
02:38, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
I removed this from lead while I was cleaning up this article in response to
this thread at ANI.
...As an occupational lung disease, it is most classically associated with aerospace manufacturing, beryllium mining or manufacturing of fluorescent light bulbs (which once contained beryllium compounds in their internal phosphor coating). [1] [2]
And it was reverted
here. The first source purports to be some army document, but it is something that has been uploaded to ScribD so who knows where it came from. Someone else saw fit to to add a fake reference to some putative GE report and use that ref to argue about whether Be was ever in fluorescent light bulbs. That is garbage arguing with garbage, One bad source arguing with another (and arguing via citations, for pete's sake) and in the lead of this (yes, per the reverting edit note) important topic. This stuff was discussed no where in the body, and anything that is in the lead should be discussed in the body in detail, and should only be in the lead if it is actually important, per
WP:LEAD. So yes, I deleted this garbage based on garbage sources. I included sourced content in the body about the occupational hazard bit and relevant industries, right in the first section.
References
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cite web}}
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help)
- Jytdog ( talk) 20:49, 29 March 2016 (UTC) (redact per Andy Dingley's objections Jytdog ( talk) 02:38, 2 April 2016 (UTC))
The article says "It is most classically associated with aerospace manufacturing, microwave semiconductor electronics, beryllium mining or manufacturing of fluorescent light bulbs (which once contained beryllium compounds in their internal phosphor coating)."
The part "It is most classically associated" is unclear and it may be unverifiable. See Berylliosis#Classification. QuackGuru ( talk) 21:09, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
Proposal: "It is historically associated with aerospace manufacturing, microwave semiconductor electronics, beryllium mining or manufacturing of fluorescent light bulbs (which once contained beryllium compounds in their internal phosphor coating)." QuackGuru ( talk) 16:22, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
"It long associated with aerospace manufacturing, microwave semiconductor electronics, beryllium mining or manufacturing of fluorescent light bulbs (which once contained beryllium compounds in their internal phosphor coating)."
or
"It associated with aerospace manufacturing, microwave semiconductor electronics, beryllium mining or manufacturing of fluorescent light bulbs (which once contained beryllium compounds in their internal phosphor coating)."
Two proposals: "long associated" or "associated". QuackGuru ( talk) 16:43, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
"Review of medical records of residents surrounding a beryllium facility showed that probable causes of CBD either displayed an abnormal blood test for beryllium and radiographic evidence consistent with disease, or met epidemiological criteria for CBD based on beryllium case registry criteria.[32]" [1] See ( PMID 20386622). QuackGuru ( talk) 21:09, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
The only other mention I can find of meallography is
https://www.engnetglobal.com/tips/glossary.aspx?word=Meallographic+Structure
which I suspect is a misspelling, it makes sense there as metallography, as here. So I have changed our article on this assumption and sent the engnetglobal website an email to confirm whether it is a misspelling. Andrewa ( talk) 13:35, 21 September 2019 (UTC)
USAF Vandenberg Air Force Base 1980's. I was exposed to solid rocket fuel exhaust an experimental launch. I'm looking for information. WebbyScott ( talk) 13:43, 22 March 2020 (UTC)