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There is no explanation as to why the blade cutting Morgoth would do anything. Was Morgoth there? Was he asleep? Was he watching peacefully, and then the blade cut him, so he decided to be angry? Should there be an explanation that he was put under Lúthien's spell, and the blade cut him and he started to awake -- or whatever the reason was? (Haven't read my Lay in a few months!) I'll do it, if nobody minds. Just thought I'd ask first. Editor at Large 12:09, 19 June 2006 (UTC)
In The Two Towers, in the section right before Shelob stings Frodo Tolkien writes, "There agelong she had dwelt, and evil thing in spider-form,..., such as Beren fought in the Mountains of Terror in Doriath,..." It might fit in the section about his journey to Doriath, although I won't add it. Fud3 19:15, 20 June 2007 (UTC)Fud3 3:15 June 20, 2007 EST
I like the "family tree" at the end of the article, but there is an opportunity to expand what the graphic gets across - by denoting men, elves, half-elven and maia. There is a complicated interrelationship to be expressed there, but I'm not sure if color coding or what would get the point across best. Pb8bije6a7b6a3w ( talk) 07:46, 13 May 2013 (UTC)
Given we say Saruman appears in The Fellowship of the Ring, surely Beren does as well, as his story is told both at weathertop and in the hall of Fire? GimliDotNet ( Speak to me, Stuff I've done) 12:38, 6 December 2014 (UTC)
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This article's story summary reads
There is no explanation as to why the blade cutting Morgoth would do anything. Was Morgoth there? Was he asleep? Was he watching peacefully, and then the blade cut him, so he decided to be angry? Should there be an explanation that he was put under Lúthien's spell, and the blade cut him and he started to awake -- or whatever the reason was? (Haven't read my Lay in a few months!) I'll do it, if nobody minds. Just thought I'd ask first. Editor at Large 12:09, 19 June 2006 (UTC)
In The Two Towers, in the section right before Shelob stings Frodo Tolkien writes, "There agelong she had dwelt, and evil thing in spider-form,..., such as Beren fought in the Mountains of Terror in Doriath,..." It might fit in the section about his journey to Doriath, although I won't add it. Fud3 19:15, 20 June 2007 (UTC)Fud3 3:15 June 20, 2007 EST
I like the "family tree" at the end of the article, but there is an opportunity to expand what the graphic gets across - by denoting men, elves, half-elven and maia. There is a complicated interrelationship to be expressed there, but I'm not sure if color coding or what would get the point across best. Pb8bije6a7b6a3w ( talk) 07:46, 13 May 2013 (UTC)
Given we say Saruman appears in The Fellowship of the Ring, surely Beren does as well, as his story is told both at weathertop and in the hall of Fire? GimliDotNet ( Speak to me, Stuff I've done) 12:38, 6 December 2014 (UTC)
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