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Lead should ideally have <= 4 paragraphs per
MOS:LEAD. There are of course exceptions, but there's currently 7 paragraphs, and some of them could potentially be merged.
104.232.119.107 (
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E.g. the second and third could potentially be merged, as with the fourth and fifth.
104.232.119.107 (
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MOS:LEAD. There are of course exceptions, but there's currently 7 paragraphs, and some of them could potentially be merged.
104.232.119.107 (
talk) 05:25, 15 May 2024 (UTC)reply
E.g. the second and third could potentially be merged, as with the fourth and fifth.
104.232.119.107 (
talk) 05:25, 15 May 2024 (UTC)reply