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Reviewer: Canadian Paul ( talk · contribs) 16:03, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
Warming up for the GA Review Drive, so let's take a look at this article:
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Other than that, everything looks good. I made a few changes, but nothing that I thought was too controversial, mostly some flow and MOS issues. To allow for this change to be made I am placing the article on hold for a period of up to a week. I'm always open to discussion so if you think I'm wrong on something leave your thoughts here and we'll discuss. I'll be checking this page at least daily, unless something comes up, so you can be sure I'll notice any comments left here. Canadian Paul 16:03, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Canadian Paul ( talk · contribs) 16:03, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
Warming up for the GA Review Drive, so let's take a look at this article:
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Other than that, everything looks good. I made a few changes, but nothing that I thought was too controversial, mostly some flow and MOS issues. To allow for this change to be made I am placing the article on hold for a period of up to a week. I'm always open to discussion so if you think I'm wrong on something leave your thoughts here and we'll discuss. I'll be checking this page at least daily, unless something comes up, so you can be sure I'll notice any comments left here. Canadian Paul 16:03, 15 June 2012 (UTC)