You don't need to place citations in the lead. Only for strong claims, if anything "The single received mixed reviews from music critics, and the song was largely blamed for Tyler's mediocre final score in the Eurovision Song Contest Final. " should be sourced rather than the others.
Done Sorted, I noticed that one sentence was exclusive to the lead so I paraphrased it below the lead (the fact that she recorded the song in Nashville).
Bonnietylersave (
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14:38, 4 January 2014 (UTC)reply
Composition
"Welsh singer Paul Child conducted in interview with Desmond Child in Nashville " "an interview?"
This section is very short, can't you perhaps merge into one of the other sections?
Done You're right - there's not many sources online that discuss the music video in detail so there wasn't much to write for it. I've moved it to the 'background and release' section.
Bonnietylersave (
talk)
14:44, 4 January 2014 (UTC)reply
Eurovision
Shouldn't you mention which nation she represented, even if obvious? representing the UK at the Eurovision and link should suffice. Should mention it in the lead too I think.
Done I have added the nation name to all places where it was missing. It was already in the lead though, unless you want me to re-phrase that part, which I will be happy to do.
Bonnietylersave (
talk)
14:45, 4 January 2014 (UTC)reply
"The song was staged with Tyler stood by a mic " can you add the formal word microphone here?
Thanks, can you just add the publisher to ref 30 too? Some of the youtube sources you should also really cite the original publisher and state "accessed via YouTube".♦
Dr. Blofeld20:48, 4 January 2014 (UTC)reply
You don't need to place citations in the lead. Only for strong claims, if anything "The single received mixed reviews from music critics, and the song was largely blamed for Tyler's mediocre final score in the Eurovision Song Contest Final. " should be sourced rather than the others.
Done Sorted, I noticed that one sentence was exclusive to the lead so I paraphrased it below the lead (the fact that she recorded the song in Nashville).
Bonnietylersave (
talk)
14:38, 4 January 2014 (UTC)reply
Composition
"Welsh singer Paul Child conducted in interview with Desmond Child in Nashville " "an interview?"
This section is very short, can't you perhaps merge into one of the other sections?
Done You're right - there's not many sources online that discuss the music video in detail so there wasn't much to write for it. I've moved it to the 'background and release' section.
Bonnietylersave (
talk)
14:44, 4 January 2014 (UTC)reply
Eurovision
Shouldn't you mention which nation she represented, even if obvious? representing the UK at the Eurovision and link should suffice. Should mention it in the lead too I think.
Done I have added the nation name to all places where it was missing. It was already in the lead though, unless you want me to re-phrase that part, which I will be happy to do.
Bonnietylersave (
talk)
14:45, 4 January 2014 (UTC)reply
"The song was staged with Tyler stood by a mic " can you add the formal word microphone here?
Thanks, can you just add the publisher to ref 30 too? Some of the youtube sources you should also really cite the original publisher and state "accessed via YouTube".♦
Dr. Blofeld20:48, 4 January 2014 (UTC)reply